[Fic] The Temperature of a Kiss

[analineblue]

Title: The Temperature of a Kiss
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: Kissing, mostly worksafe though. I think. I wrote it at work, so.... >_>
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,584
Summary: Just kissing...
Notes: Stolen title. :P Stolen theme too, I guess, because this is completely inspired by manikineko's fic from a few days ago. :D (And by the fact

Comments

[manikineko]

You posted it! :3 Sorry, just wanted to be the first to comment XD I´ll read it now and will return with a real comment <3

[manikineko]

Okay, read it... <333 So lovely!
My favorite line: “We should go somewhere else,” he whispers against Takashi’s ear, feeling the other man relax into a smile.

I can totally see that and I can totally understand Tuti´s reaction to that (^_^)

The hottest line is this one, though: Then Takashi’s tongue finds his collarbone, and his hand slips under the thin cotton of Tuti’s shirt, smooth fingers brushing lightly over his chest. Tuti gives an involuntary shiver before their mouths meet again, and Takashi’s tongue presses against his.

Thanks for satisfying my chest-fetish (^_~)

You did a great job on that and I´ll definitely read it again and again and... you know XD

[analineblue]

Thank you~ I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

...And I was totally thinking about you and your chest-fetish when I wrote that line. ^_~

<333

[babydracky]

As always this just too cute^^
I just can imagine them on that bench, Takashi's teeth on Tuti's collaborne (teeeeeth XDXDXD)
You did great^^

[analineblue]

XDDD Teeth, indeed.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

[innusiq]

I loved this, plain and simple. I'm also a little thankful that I'm not the only one to have noticed Tuti's bandage... I don't know exactly what that means but... I noticed to too!

My favorite line today: Tuti feels his face warm immediately, and he’s suddenly struck by the fact that this person in front of him, his friend, someone who’s been by his side for years, can suddenly make him feel as giddy and as light and as dizzy as he’s ever felt in his entire life, just with one look, one touch…

Why? Even though they've been friends for years, even though they are a couple (and a serious one at that), there is something called life that always seems to get in the way of relationships, and while I see them as being in a serious relationship (you can just feel it), I think the life interruptions that keep them apart at times can cause them to question and doubt themselves and each other and in that moment... that one line... it's like a light bulb turning on. It's not that he's actually forgotten the depth of what they are to each

[tonomurajiro]

totally agree with you *nod nod*

[analineblue]

It made complete sense. <3 And I totally agree - that theme somehow ends up creeping into a lot of what I write too... I really feel like it fits with them though. At least that's how I view their relationship a lot of the time, that there are these little moments happening all the time, things that are really special, that make up for all the hardships, and all the time spent apart.

Anyway, thank you. I always really enjoy hearing your thoughts about them. XD

[jazzy_peaches]

I love fics where they walk home late at night and get distracted. <3333

And I also love fics where Takashi is a little goofball. Because...he is. And its cute to watch them just have fun together. <33333

:D

[analineblue]

XD Me too. There should be more of them. *nodnod*

*grins* I like when he's goofy too.

Thanks for reading~ ^_^

[tonomurajiro]

Oh, Jamie *hugs* this really wins my heart ♥ ♥ ♥

I really really, really love this, Jamie. Very sweet and romantic and desribe everything about them. innusiq has said everything I thought about this fic XD;;; They just know where they stand beside each other and *sighs* there's just too much love ♥ ♥ ♥

my favorite line is this : Tuti feels his face warm immediately, and he’s suddenly struck by the fact that this person in front of him, his friend, someone who’s been by his side for years, can suddenly make him feel as giddy and as light and as dizzy as he’s ever felt in his entire life, just with one look, one touch…

and this one : ,and that brings Takashi’s arms around his waist possessively for a moment, before they finally start walking.

and also this :

Tuti grins. “Feeling impatient?”

Takashi tilts his head up at Tuti, and glances at him slyly. “Always.”

ksajdhksahdkfshdkjfhskjdhfkshdfksjdfh ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

//always good to start a day with reading a good fic even the connection is acting up on me//

[analineblue]

*snuggles* Thank you, as always. <3333 I was happy to have an excuse (that excuse being Denise, mostly ^_~) to write so much sap. ^_~

*pokes your connection* Hopefully it will be better tomorrow. *_*

[tonomurajiro]

It's better! *dances around*

Hehehehe and I hope I can find my inspiration again because... I need to write something and I have given up on my angsty fic XD;;

[analineblue]

I hope you can find your inspiration again too! Perhaps you should try writing about kissing too. It worked for me. ^_~