[Fic] Spark
Title: Spark
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None. Worksafe.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,354
Summary: Tuti wants to photograph Nagayan in the morning, when the light is just right...
Notes: I wrote this at work this afternoon when I was supposed to be doing something else. XD; I've been wanting to write about cameraman!Tuti for weeks ( Read more... )
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None. Worksafe.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,354
Summary: Tuti wants to photograph Nagayan in the morning, when the light is just right...
Notes: I wrote this at work this afternoon when I was supposed to be doing something else. XD; I've been wanting to write about cameraman!Tuti for weeks ( Read more... )
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BACK IN 30 MINUTES WITH A PROPER REVIEW. ARGH.
ARGH.
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It makes him want to be the one whispering direction into Takashi’s ear. The tilt of his head, the angle of his shoulder, the intensity of his gaze…
I LOVE this line, I dunno who--just, it reminds me when someone mentioend an AU with Tuti as a photographer who meets Nagayan (still an actor/model/himself) on a job... And the idea of Tuti wanting some measure of control over Nagayan who seems really in-control himself is really hot, too XD
He tries to remember, as best he can, the details of each particular day, what happened before, and after, what they talked about on the train on the way home from whatever location they’d chosen, the temperature of the air, or the smell of the coffee that seemed to be constantly brewing in Takashi’s kitchen, no matter what time of day it happened to be.I really liked this part too, just this image of Tuti flipping through the photos and trying to remember the circumstances of them all, making them all the more ( ... )
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It's kind of funny too, because when I was thinking about this initially, I wasn't really imagining Tuti directing Nagayan, persay, I was more thinking of him stealing shots here and there? But I don't know... It seemed like it kind of made sense that there'd be a little of both going on...
Anyway~ I'm glad you liked it. ♥
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There's only one word for this. It's like watching a poetry in images you conjured up with your gorgeous lines. Thoughts and memories blend in gently, perfectly, and give this little piece an intimacy I feel like I have no rights barging into. Your Tuti loves his Nagayan very deeply and I could feel that radiating from your writing. Beautiful.
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I don't even know what else to say, but... I'm just really glad you liked it. <333 I wasn't really expecting the style to come across as so poetic either, so I'm glad that seemed to work as opposed to being overly-emotional or something. XD; But thank you so much, I really appreciate it. ♥
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And I hope that you'll write more soon too. *_*
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*sighs wistfully* this, my dear, has successfully turned me into a puddle of goo and I'm feeling really content and happy and warm just from reading this. I don't know... I can feel love radiating from this fic. It's just... *sighs again* yeah, like Polluxa said, beautiful.
*snuggles*
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I'm really happy that I could contribute in some way to the niceness of your morning. <333
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The one thing I do want to at least convey is how much I love this! I love the whole tying into the month separation the couple is heading into. And camera!Tuti - totally loving that! And Takashi wanting Tuti to send him that picture is just... awwwww! I... just... much love...
See mush, but thank you for sharing!
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This: Takashi quickly becomes candid and warm in the morning sunlight.
Reminded me of this: Nagayan Blog Entry 03 23 2008
When I first saw this blog pic I thought "Damn, how lucky is Tuti getting to wake up next to this man?" So that line of yours... made this fic all the more real for me.
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I almost typed "overlord" O_o
XD
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