[Fic] Unravel

[analineblue]

Title: Unravel
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None. Worksafe.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,451
Summary: Tuti watches Nagayan on the dance floor.
Notes: I started writing this while watching Nagayan's Live DVD, because I wanted to write something about Tuti watching him dance. At first it was just going to be a short, unrequited!Tuti

Comments

[manikineko]

<3 I´m so glad you decided to share this! I really liked it, it was totally different from all the things you´ve written so far. Without a real beginning or ending, but I think this is how the feeling of a night full of dancing transfers best. I can´t say if it is angsty or not either XD But it didn´t give me a bad feeling while reading it because they are still together in the end, although Tuti comes home alone. I sound weird, but I guess you know what I mean (^_~) Thanks for sharing, ne~ *hugs*

[analineblue]

You know, it's really interesting that you saw them as still being together at the end. Because... I really wasn't thinking that way at all. In my mind, they'd already broken up... Looking back though, I can see how it wasn't 100% clear (I didn't really want it to be, I guess) but... It's just interesting that you saw it as having a more optimistic ending than I'd planned on. :D

I'm glad that you thought the general structure worked for this too. And... that you enjoyed it. ^____^

[reader_a]

thanks for sharing that,
it was absolutely wonderful.
Loved that you used Tuti's point of view, and how the night proceeds.
Not the ending I expected, but very good honestly. ^^

[analineblue]

I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. :)

[analineblue]

This was definitely a different kind of fic than I usually write for them. I'm not used to such unhappy endings. ^_~ Thank you though - I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

[innusiq]

First off, this was so absolutely beautiful... is that even the right word? I love the feeling it leaves behind... and for some reason I just can't explain it... as I think neither of them really can either. And Secondly... so sad :( How can these two people be in such sync with each other, even in their separation, and not be together?

And yet, in the sadness of it all... I can still feel a little hope for them because darn it, I am in eternal optimist, but more importantly it's the draw they feel towards one another - like no matter what their heads have decided, they have no control over their hearts.

Thank you for sharing with us!

[analineblue]

Thank you so much. <33 I think I can see a little optimism here too, even despite the fact that the way I was seeing this was really from the perspective of what it would be like if their relationship just honestly... failed, despite the attraction, and despite how obviously focused they are on each other. Had this been any longer, I think I would have headed in a different direction though, since I'm always an optimist too, when it comes to things like this... I can only write them apart for so long, I think. ^_~ Anyway. Thanks so much for the comment, and I'm really happy you liked this. ^_^

[hamykia]

T_T
I totally loved it, didn't know you were so good as a writer. I feel ashamed, I may be the only one that fails here U_U

[analineblue]

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. <3

*hugs*