Comments | tutixnagayan: [Fic] Smile

analineblue in tutixnagayan

[Fic] Smile

Oct 17, 2005 12:10

Some fluff to balance the angst? ^_^

Title: Smile
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None, mostly worksafe
Rating: PG-13
Notes: So I totally neglected everything this morning and wrote shameless fluff! And I'm spamming the community! Gomen... :P So yeah, I've actually had this on my mind for a while, this being Nagayan's utterly ( Read more... )

analineblue, fanfic

Comments 15

kooriyoukai October 17 2005, 17:23:13 UTC

*puddles happily*

Ohhhhhh myyyyyyyyy god, Jamie you're a genius! Holy cow I will NEVER look at that smile on Nagayan's face the same way again! How do you DO this? I swear, you never fail to write these absolutely amazing, gorgeous pieces of fanfiction that completely floor me with how... right they feel, how seamlessly they seem to become a part of the world these two live in. Every word they exchange, they look they share, every element of their desires for each other just seem to break through every boundary there might be between them and our imaginations. It's perfect, and I am seriously in awe of how far you've come in your writing, that you've been able to reach this point of honesty and purity in your storytelling, to be so in tune with human emotions and have the ability to tell them believeably through the eyes of these two men. Guh, yes, much love for this fic, and your previous post too, though I think I spent significant time spazzing about it to you over the IM earlier hehe. Keep on doing what you're doing hun, ( ... )

milenalupin October 17 2005, 19:59:40 UTC

Oh. Ooooooooohhhh...

That was. *sighs*
Adorable.
Niiiiiice. Verrrry niiiiiice, indeed.

Love the scene. Gotta love Tuti, even though he's a horrible mean early riser... Totally commiserating with Takashi here! Duh, early rising bed partners are eeeevil.

And the photo. Oh the photo. *steals for iconage*

analineblue October 18 2005, 03:59:17 UTC

*____* ICON.... That's great! *happy dance* ^__^

Thanks so much for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed it and.... *stares at smiling Nagayan again* XD XD

It's a dangerous icon, that one is... O_O

milenalupin October 18 2005, 18:56:02 UTC

Dangerous?
The killing part, or the smile part? ^_~

You're welcome to share the delinquency, a.k.a. steal the icon...

milenalupin October 18 2005, 19:08:05 UTC

Guilty as charged. Too much procrastination time at hand.

The Original (for self-tweaking purposes):

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lizstarsky October 18 2005, 02:25:45 UTC

Guh. I die with love for this fic. It gave me such warm fuzzies that I had to go back and read it again, and that gave me such warm fuzzies that I wanted to read it one more time after that, but instead I decided that no, I should comment first, and then I can read it as many times as I want. XD

But seriously, wow, so impressed with this fic. The writing is flawless, the characterizations are perfect, and it's just such a wonderful/beautiful moment between the two of them... Guh.

Some of my absolute favorite lines:

It just didn’t seem fair, other people seeing this.

“Tuti, you know I only smile like that for you. Only when I’m thinking about you, ok?” <3

...he still didn’t want to let Takashi out of his sight when he was smiling like that.

A lazy, early morning kiss that was as close to perfection as Tuti had ever felt.

Though OH, I did notice a typo! Ahem: “What did I do to reserve that last baka, anyway?”Anyway, though, this was such a beautiful, amazing fic, and I'm so glad you slacked off work to write it. I always ( ... )

analineblue October 18 2005, 04:07:07 UTC

*dies a horrible shameful death by typos* Dammit! How did I miss that?? How did KY miss that? *sigh* :(

But moving on... I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And hmm...I don't know why I keep writing so much from Tuti's POV! *laughs* Or rather, I do, but I won't admit it. *shakes head* Writing stuff is not just an excuse for me to look at Nagayan and... *shuts up* :P

Anyway, thanks for reading!! XD

subetehoshi March 3 2006, 16:05:29 UTC

Yay for reading this in class this morning and NOT paying attention to the minuscule details of the prof blabbing on about the importance of Indole Acetic Acid in plants...yuck

This fic was OMFG amazing!

I love how you always get into the details of how Tuti cherishes the small things about Nagayan...and that he doesn't need anything more than seeing Nagayan smile to make him happy....

ack, I LOVE how you write these guys...makes my heart all dokidoki...haha

Now everytime Nagayan gets that smile on his face...I'm gonna be like "He MUST be thinking of Tuti! *SQUEAL*"!

I LOVE YOU...teehee

WORD of the day: "details".... (^____^)

analineblue March 3 2006, 16:37:19 UTC

*grins* This was another example of me being fixated on them waking up I think. And Nagayan's smile, of course, which I am fixated on much of the time. XDD But nya, yay! I'm glad you liked it, and it makes me happy to think of you thinking of Nagayan thinking of Tuti when he smiles like that. O_o;;; If that makes sense. XDD Anyway, thank you for reading... ^__^

hibimaosuki March 30 2006, 08:24:46 UTC

*and cue melting*

And er... yeah. If Chem hadn't just turned my already non-existent brains into mush 5 hours ago, I'd be more articulate, but... GAH.

Luv. Much.

analineblue March 30 2006, 17:49:27 UTC

Nya, thank you... ^_^ And hehe... *pats your brainmush* XD;;; I seem to be in a very strange mood today, so feel free to just ignooooore me. ^_~