[Fic] Love

[analineblue]

Title: Love
Author: analine
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Warnings: None, worksafe.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,135
Summary: Nagayan feels something more than support from the people around him sometimes.
Notes: So the most recent Bleach Live opens with the cast in a line across the stage, on their knees, formal Japanese style, bowing deeply. Tuti and

Comments

[kooriyoukai]

Yaaaay fic! I really liked it ^_^

Also, it's written pretty different from your usual style, at least mostly in the beginning. Probably because it was in present tense? I don't write that too often I guess, so it was interesting and neat to see that new perspective :) I really liked the mood of the story though, how easily it showed them interacting, how wonderfully in character it was, just picturing them laughing and smiling and Tuti's hand on Nagayan's shoulder is so easy to visualize. You did a really good job with all that kind of subtle detail, it was very nice :)

The only thing I can say I thought was weird were the few times Nagayan popped a coughdrop and then you mentioned him swallowing, just made me half expect to read that he started choking on it XD; Excellent otherwise though, I'm so happy to see you writing again and that you were inspired by your trip to Japan, it really helps us with feeling closer to the shows and their lives when we get to see things up close like this ^_^

[kooriyoukai]

Wow, I didn't mean I I meant YOU don't write present tense that often *laughs* I blame distracting phone calls and my hungry state of mind ^^

[analineblue]

Yeah, I know it's been a while since I've written in present tense... Or possibly ever? *laughs* I think it was because I had read a bunch of fics in a similar style before I started this, so it just ended up coming out that way. ^_~

And haha, yeah, he didn't choke on the cough drop. XD;;;; At least I hope not. I was more thinking about how you suck on a cough drop and swallow the liquid, etc., to cool your throat? XD;;;

But anyway, yeah, I was happy that I came back inspired too, since I always worry about that, especially this time. ^_~

[innusiq]

I really liked this. Why does that statement sound surprised? Because I shouldn't be surprised really. It was like a glimpse into the reality of stage life, with the bonus splash of TutixNagayan. Thanks for sharing, as always.

[analineblue]

Thank you so much. ^_^ I'm really glad you liked it.

(And wow, I'm still thinking about your fic from the other day. *__* I really want more. ^___^)

[shy_violette]

^___^ Yay! Aww, what a perfect thing to read in the middle of a draggy, headache-y sort of day. I decree that lunchtime fic should observed, every day! *holds her hands out wide* Make it so!

Seriously, though, you do such an amazing job of showing the details of the backstage, and again with the heat of the lights, and awareness of the actors around you... ^__^ There's nothing quite like theater, especially with people who mean a lot to you. Brava!

[analineblue]

*laughs* Lunchtime fic... *nods* I will do my best~ \^o^/

And thank you. XD I really tried to capture all the details I could, and it made it a lot easier having it fresh in my mind, I think. But yeah, I think that these performances really must be like magic sometimes, with so many close friendships off-stage, etc. *___*

Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

[namoony]

Poor Tatsuya~ I'm sure the cast really made fun of him after that show. ^____^

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the fic. It's so natural, so real. And with so many details. *__* I almost thought I was back there, watching them. And I think I feel better about everything now. *nodnod*

Thank you for writing it~♥

[analineblue]

I really feel like I was back there too, writing it. *__* So I'm glad it felt that way to you too.

And wow, I'm really, really looking forward to your Air Gear fics... *__* Just since I know I couldn't really write about them, but... I want to relive it! *laughs* XD XD

[babydracky]

As always WONDERFUL!!!!^____________________________^
That was a so long I didn't read a TutiXNagayan!^^
*giggles!*

“Want to go back to the ten feet rule?”
That one is just TOO good!^^

Thanks!!!^^

[analineblue]

Thanks for reading~ ^__^

I'm glad you liked it, and hehe... Somehow I don't think that 10 foot rule would last very long with them, but... I could see them attempting it. ^_~