At First Sight
Title: At First Sight
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: YeKyu (Yesung x Kyuhyun)
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Summary: Three drabbles about how Jongwoon and Kyuhyun fall in love at first sight.
For rhenny happy birthday love! :)
( But Kyuhyun doesn’t know anything about him other than the fact that he goes on the elevator everyday at 8:05am. )
I think this is my first time commenting on your fics? Not saying I haven't read any before, I'm pretty sure I have, but this would be my first comment. Warning now, my comments are nonsensical and weird and just spammy so...I apologise in advance :3
AND another warning: I am severely allergic to love at first sight. Don't even ask why, I will start ranting, I just hate the idea and yeahh...so I kind of walked into the fic prejudiced but I love KyuSung and I love you so I risked my allergy...lol
OKIES to start the actual comment, my favourite was the first one, by no surprise now that I look at it. It really seemed like infatuation at first sight, which is fine by me, and I adored how freaking cute it was. I can just imagine Kyu standing there in the elevator lift, completely dumbfounded and staring. I can imagine them just looking into each other's eyes, Kyu pretty much a statue of infatuation, lol. it was CUTE I TELL YOU CUTE. I also LOVE LOVE LOVE the 10 years thing...It shows that they weathered timem worked hard to keep together and built on the initial attraction, I love how they could build their relationship and I couldn't help but squeal at the idea of a grown up Jongwoon playfully covering Kyu's eyes (legit squealed, not even kidding)!!! And I love the idea of routine...they still take the elevator at the same time... So cute I really adored it ;~;
Second one was my second favourite. Disheveled, late Jongwoon bumping into dashing Kyu was too hard not to like...lol. The phone number giving thing was kind of awks cuz jie I really don't reccomend giving your phone number to a total stranger lol. I'm also not too much of a fan of destiny but it was beyond cute (and smart) the way that you incorporated Kyuhyun coming into Super Junior at the end...Everything just kind of fell into place, that whole 'Ahhhh' moment you have at the end of the movie when you figure out the whole mystery and I loved it!!
I don't think I can comment properly on the third cuz it was just like...R&J-esque-ish in the way they hadn't really exchanged any words before they you know...kissed. But I guess it wasn't as bad as R&J (which I hate with an undying passion...don't even ask lol) and it was cute how they were secretly stalking each other and Kyu got unreasonably jealous...lol. I bet Jongwoon secretly asked Jongjin creepy stalker things about Kyu...such a Jongwoon thing to do really...lol
Anyway, all three were really wonderfully written. Your language is succinct and flowed really well...You're dialogue isn't awkward, btw, it's quite fluid but I can see why you would hate writing it lol I like the way you write jie ^^ And these 3 were just overflowing with sweetness and fluff and cuteness...I just couldn't handle it... :DDDD Well done jie I loved it!!
PS. is this too spazzy? lol
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It's strange, but I actually dislike the idea of love at first sight too. It's unrealistic...I mean, what do you fall in love with? Their flawless face, toned body, height? But it's a concept that's surrounding us all the time in stories, and I thought it would be fun to write about it :P But aww I'm glad you risked your allergy. I think love, in many ways, starts off with infatuation. I don't think there's any love story that doesn't have elements of it.
Haha the first and second ones were my faves tbh, since the third is somewhat AU, and I tend to not like my AU fics. I'm glad you liked those two ^^ And yes, giving your number to a total strange is kinda awkward and creepy (call me maybe?), but it's Jongwoon and I doubt he's ever not awkward xD
LOL don't get me started on R&J. The play was amazing. The characters...not so much. More of a "this is so tragic because the characters are so stupid" rather than "this is so tragic because of their circumstances" imo. But I totally agree with you about the creepy stalker things Jongwoon asks being a very Jongwoon thing to do :P
Aww ♥♥ Haha yeah I write very short things. Succinct sums my writing style perfectly I think :) Hahaha I hate dialogue. I avoid it at all costs.
Hehe, I love spazzy comments, so this made me very happeh :)
It's been a while since I wrote pure fluff, so I've been a little out of practice. I glad you loved it! /phew/
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