[Lost] Charlie Ficlet (for Jemma!)

Jun 20, 2009 18:37

Title: Give Them Blood (gallons of the stuff)
Author: turquoisetumult
Rating: PG?
Word Count: 350
Characters/Pairings: Charlie, mentions of Claire
Genre: General.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost or its characters.
Warning: This is unbeta-ed. But it should be a-okay to read considering English is my first language and all... Nevertheless, even though I ( Read more... )

fic, tv shows, lost, challenge

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jemmalynette June 21 2009, 10:47:19 UTC
OMG IT'S HERE, YAY!! This was perfect, Maria! Gosh, I love your writing so much! I love the references to Claire and also how he wanted to become a doctor for his mum but couldn't. You captured his mindset wonderfully! I like how you described his queasiness towards blood but how lately he's seen so much of it that it hardly bothers him anymore. He took a horrible beating in that station but yeah, he really didn't seem to care much and I think your explanation for that here works really well; how Claire and Aaron are worth it. Poor Charlie. But yes, loved this!! Thank youuu!! I'm saving this to memories! Awesome job!!

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turquoisetumult June 21 2009, 14:36:49 UTC
Aw, Jemma, thank you so much for your wonderfully detailed feedback! I'm so happy that you enjoyed this little 350-word ficlet.

Thanks again!

P.S. I just posted your Shaun ficlet too, if you wanna check that out, as well!

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