Debates and
So Isaac are having a Facebook wall debate on cut vs slit. (see my last post)
Me: It's cut, not slit.
Isaac: it can be cut or slit. doesn't matter. :D
Me: But the lyrics say cut, therefore it's cut. There's a difference.
Isaac: no there isn't. You cut yourself and slit your wrists. You can cut your wrist but that just sounds weird. :P
Me: You can slit other things. You can slit a box. You can slit your throat. Plus, to slit implies it's vertical and down your wrist. Cut could mean vertical, horizontal, or any direction. Therefore you can cut your vein in half but you cannot slit it in half.
Plus you're being insonsistent by saying they're the same thing and then saying "you slit your wrists or you cut yourself..." :P
I win.
Currently awaiting his reply.
And the below is a cut not a slit :P
I've been told the below title sounds like that of a Panic! or FOB song.
Yeah some parts of it sound wrong but I swear, I just strung random quotes together.
It wasn't intended to be wrong.
You only commit to murder and suicide
My lips bloom, they split in two
meet the car crash, coming soon
trip on petals on my back
tongues tied together passionate mad
Legal littering body heat
in and out you're such a tease.
Petals of a pink rosette
Inhale exhale better than the rest.
*CHORUS*
Try not to don't want to
reel me in shove me away
see-saw swing set back and forth
I'm just a game you love to play
venus fly trap let me go
left to right from fast to slow
* *
Say good morning all alone
sleepy eyes, no bye or hello
sit up straight walk and stumble
try to call you, mumble jumbo
there you are give her a kiss
hands in hair, tears on skin
lips on lips, fade and scream
maybe none of this is real
*CHORUS*
Guilty conscience tastes of deatj
trigger dagger vial and one last breath
there one lies and here one stand
Dean, alive, but hand in hand
*CHORUS*
{try to guess if she killed him or killed herself :P }
As I lie in bed
I shed my skin as you shed tears
hiding all that covers me
exposed uncensored so surreal
whatever it's called, its bittersweet
Longing locks sudden fingers
running through don't let go
one last kiss let me linger
one last hand I want to hold
~CHORUS~
Under the covers you disintegrate
the only one I love to hate
drowning in your eyes
melting in your arms
bathing in your scent
I feel all alone but
I can still feel you
~ ~
Breathing beating rise and fall
let it slip but not really
truthless honesty yes you are
false or fiction, not what it seems
I only see in shades of grey
black and white through colorless eyes
pounce and cling with marksman aim
two mouths two bodies, yours on mine
~CHORUS~
If i close my eyes you might go away
but baby if it don't work that way
I'm on something, you're addicting
high on love and laughter and life
Lies cloak the floor and you don't know
i'm too afraid to let you go
Over and over, breaking and fixing
crumble with glue, repair with a knife
~ ~
Tear stained cheeks and salty lips
foggy lies cover glass inside
hidden darknes, what is this?
no not yet, it's not time
Heavy mellow purple sheets
fuzzy fluffy comfort zone
candy chocolate sugar dreams
salutations goodbye hello
~CHORUS~
Say hat sigh you're heaving
doesn't mean you're leaving
try to prove me wrong
tell me you knew all along.
Love
Well I thought it was love
at the time
but as soon as you're over him
It ain't love anymore, baby,
It's want. Lust.
Whatever you wanna call it.
Cuz no one, not even the strongest
Can get over love
And vice versa
I hate him.
He's better than me.
He's too perfect.
He's perfect.
I love him.
Brush
When your hand brushes me
I want to hold it.
When your arm brushes me
I want it around me.
When your lips brush mine
Pigs will fly.
Goodbye (9th grade)
Walk on beaches
hold my hand
kiss my lips
toes in sand
arm 'round shoulder
look me in the eye
play my song
don't say goodbye.
Haikus
Damn
Damn it, damn you, damn
All we ever had. Damn it.
Damn it all to hell.
Writer (8th grade)
Spend most of my time
Staring at a blank paper
With nothing to write
Friends
He gave me a hug
And said "friends forever" cuz
That's all we can be
Imitation of an emo haiku
I stare at my wrists
What would they look like with scars,
And should I find out?
The last one was just a joke. :P
It's something between me and a friend of mine.
Me: It's cut, not slit.
Isaac: it can be cut or slit. doesn't matter. :D
Me: But the lyrics say cut, therefore it's cut. There's a difference.
Isaac: no there isn't. You cut yourself and slit your wrists. You can cut your wrist but that just sounds weird. :P
Me: You can slit other things. You can slit a box. You can slit your throat. Plus, to slit implies it's vertical and down your wrist. Cut could mean vertical, horizontal, or any direction. Therefore you can cut your vein in half but you cannot slit it in half.
Plus you're being insonsistent by saying they're the same thing and then saying "you slit your wrists or you cut yourself..." :P
I win.
Currently awaiting his reply.
And the below is a cut not a slit :P
I've been told the below title sounds like that of a Panic! or FOB song.
Yeah some parts of it sound wrong but I swear, I just strung random quotes together.
It wasn't intended to be wrong.
You only commit to murder and suicide
My lips bloom, they split in two
meet the car crash, coming soon
trip on petals on my back
tongues tied together passionate mad
Legal littering body heat
in and out you're such a tease.
Petals of a pink rosette
Inhale exhale better than the rest.
*CHORUS*
Try not to don't want to
reel me in shove me away
see-saw swing set back and forth
I'm just a game you love to play
venus fly trap let me go
left to right from fast to slow
* *
Say good morning all alone
sleepy eyes, no bye or hello
sit up straight walk and stumble
try to call you, mumble jumbo
there you are give her a kiss
hands in hair, tears on skin
lips on lips, fade and scream
maybe none of this is real
*CHORUS*
Guilty conscience tastes of deatj
trigger dagger vial and one last breath
there one lies and here one stand
Dean, alive, but hand in hand
*CHORUS*
{try to guess if she killed him or killed herself :P }
As I lie in bed
I shed my skin as you shed tears
hiding all that covers me
exposed uncensored so surreal
whatever it's called, its bittersweet
Longing locks sudden fingers
running through don't let go
one last kiss let me linger
one last hand I want to hold
~CHORUS~
Under the covers you disintegrate
the only one I love to hate
drowning in your eyes
melting in your arms
bathing in your scent
I feel all alone but
I can still feel you
~ ~
Breathing beating rise and fall
let it slip but not really
truthless honesty yes you are
false or fiction, not what it seems
I only see in shades of grey
black and white through colorless eyes
pounce and cling with marksman aim
two mouths two bodies, yours on mine
~CHORUS~
If i close my eyes you might go away
but baby if it don't work that way
I'm on something, you're addicting
high on love and laughter and life
Lies cloak the floor and you don't know
i'm too afraid to let you go
Over and over, breaking and fixing
crumble with glue, repair with a knife
~ ~
Tear stained cheeks and salty lips
foggy lies cover glass inside
hidden darknes, what is this?
no not yet, it's not time
Heavy mellow purple sheets
fuzzy fluffy comfort zone
candy chocolate sugar dreams
salutations goodbye hello
~CHORUS~
Say hat sigh you're heaving
doesn't mean you're leaving
try to prove me wrong
tell me you knew all along.
Love
Well I thought it was love
at the time
but as soon as you're over him
It ain't love anymore, baby,
It's want. Lust.
Whatever you wanna call it.
Cuz no one, not even the strongest
Can get over love
And vice versa
I hate him.
He's better than me.
He's too perfect.
He's perfect.
I love him.
Brush
When your hand brushes me
I want to hold it.
When your arm brushes me
I want it around me.
When your lips brush mine
Pigs will fly.
Goodbye (9th grade)
Walk on beaches
hold my hand
kiss my lips
toes in sand
arm 'round shoulder
look me in the eye
play my song
don't say goodbye.
Haikus
Damn
Damn it, damn you, damn
All we ever had. Damn it.
Damn it all to hell.
Writer (8th grade)
Spend most of my time
Staring at a blank paper
With nothing to write
Friends
He gave me a hug
And said "friends forever" cuz
That's all we can be
Imitation of an emo haiku
I stare at my wrists
What would they look like with scars,
And should I find out?
The last one was just a joke. :P
It's something between me and a friend of mine.