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rayruz January 30 2010, 12:33:07 UTC
I know... I feel so bad for Kat and Kara. Oh well. One chapter to go.

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ecstaticdance January 30 2010, 04:25:06 UTC
Nice job re-imagining New Caprica and the escape. My heart aches for Faith, that she really would have preferred death to survival (with the Cylons, but still -- she might have been excited by the prospect of continuing to fight them).

I'm so glad Lee was there for Kara here, taking care of her and helping her find a safe space, but again with the heart break. For both Kara and Kat. Those hot shot, problem pilots have a way of getting under your skin, don't they?

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rayruz January 30 2010, 12:35:56 UTC
The safe space scene was probably my favorite thing to write... in terms of being a psych person... Kara never really got that in the series, just got crammed back into a bunk filled with people... not an easy transition.

Faith's a frakked up little baby isn't she?

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somewhereapart January 30 2010, 16:24:22 UTC
Ooooooh, I am all intrigued. What's gonna happen to Faith? Is Kara going to tell Lee about Leoben? Is she going to kick Tigh's ass?

Great chapter, my friend!

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rayruz February 1 2010, 02:32:04 UTC
Just gonna have to wait and see!

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callmeonetrack January 30 2010, 17:54:59 UTC
Nice job! I love Lee's dialogue that you added when he first finds her at the raptor! And I just love Lee. I am filled with Lee love here. I just want them to always take care of each other. Sigh...

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rayruz February 1 2010, 02:32:24 UTC
I know! I do too! But I think they're a little too messed up for that :(

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shah_of_blah January 31 2010, 22:49:57 UTC
Wow, the penultimate chapter and Faith's been taken by the Cylons? Crazy. But, really good chapter. I appreciated the way Kara's incarceration was changed by the altered circumstances, and I really liked Lee's POV as he's waiting for her and then, well, welcoming her back.

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rayruz February 1 2010, 02:32:55 UTC
Playing with the different circumstances was interesting, glad you enjoyed that.

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