ANOTHER plot idea!
http://ubergoth.net/sims/bushkerry/index.html - The best political shounen ai YAOI ever. It feels frighteningly real. Must be an effect of too much fanfiction.
I have two pages and a half pages fo my fic needed for Thursday, but I hate what I've gotten out. It all sucks. u.u
I'm officially just about the best Spanish student in my class. It's so easy, though. Wish I ahd a teacher like this for Japaneese.
Have this plot idea about Itsuki's past, shitty stereotypes and all. The basic cliche thing involves young Itsuki and starts with him having no family other than an older sister and brother. (I'm SO tempted to have his name have been Shinobu at that age, but the male equivalent of it) Seeing that he's such a pretty boy that looks more like a female than tough, his family realizes that he won't stand a chance i nthe real world until he's strong underneath that. Until then, when they're out in the world, Itsuki poses as his brother's little mate/sex slave, along with his sister if she comes, so as to threaten others away. (His brother looks far different, perhaps by having a different father, and his appearance gives of a lot mroe strengh, plus he's not young and weak, like Itsu) His sister keeps emphasizing to him how pretty he is, and how he can't let himself ever get scarred or hurt, because he needs to depend on his looks. (She doesn't think he'll live long enough to gain enough strengh to protect himself, and because it's assumed that she's rather weak as well, they might have the same father who was a more permanent mate for their mother, and he was a weakling or something, so she thinks it runs in the family) Trying to teach him to take advantage of it, she puts a lot of effort into giving him lessons on how to speak, act, and over all look charming, so as to get what he needs through being a prostitute. (She hopes he'll find someone to work with him who is very strong, and thus can be used as a threat and will share in whatever her brother earns) Thinking whatever name I give him is not enoguh to charm people *coughShinobucough*, she wants him to change his name to Tsuki, which means moon and is far more attractive. She laso explains to him how to talk, hence how he speaks all poetically in the future.
Eventually he seperates from his family (Over dramatic death scenes are too overdone, so I'll make an overdramtic "Oh no, I'm lost and can't find them for teh rest of the plotline!" instead) and does get in an agreement with some boy who wil lact as his threat, and learns to be a good prostitute and enjoy it himself. His users wouldn't dare hurt him, else they'll answer to a stronger demon. (<--- BTW, for those wondering why the strong demon doesn't just go in by himself, perhaps he worries about gangs, or maybe just wants an easy life. Or likes having sex with Itsuki-chan as well. Something like that.) One of the biggest lessons his sister taught him was "Always do and say what your partner wants". Thus, when some user is into in and murmurs "Ah...Kimi wa ii, Tsuki-chan da yo..." (<--- Means "Oh... You're good, Tsuki-chan...) he hears incorrectly and uses the name "Itsuki" for her. Later, he talks to his friend about it, and rather liking the name, decides to stick with it. (<--- Cheap excuse.)
From there, I have rough ideas. (Hey, I only had two boring class periods to figure this out!) The uraotoko and him getting stronger will be needed, of course, and eventually meeting Shinobu, not even remembering where the name is from.
...You know, this idea is really out there. O.o Eh, tell me what you think, and please be polite and back it up with facts, as two boring class periods of work/shit should not be crushed/proved shitty without some good facts.
I have two pages and a half pages fo my fic needed for Thursday, but I hate what I've gotten out. It all sucks. u.u
I'm officially just about the best Spanish student in my class. It's so easy, though. Wish I ahd a teacher like this for Japaneese.
Have this plot idea about Itsuki's past, shitty stereotypes and all. The basic cliche thing involves young Itsuki and starts with him having no family other than an older sister and brother. (I'm SO tempted to have his name have been Shinobu at that age, but the male equivalent of it) Seeing that he's such a pretty boy that looks more like a female than tough, his family realizes that he won't stand a chance i nthe real world until he's strong underneath that. Until then, when they're out in the world, Itsuki poses as his brother's little mate/sex slave, along with his sister if she comes, so as to threaten others away. (His brother looks far different, perhaps by having a different father, and his appearance gives of a lot mroe strengh, plus he's not young and weak, like Itsu) His sister keeps emphasizing to him how pretty he is, and how he can't let himself ever get scarred or hurt, because he needs to depend on his looks. (She doesn't think he'll live long enough to gain enough strengh to protect himself, and because it's assumed that she's rather weak as well, they might have the same father who was a more permanent mate for their mother, and he was a weakling or something, so she thinks it runs in the family) Trying to teach him to take advantage of it, she puts a lot of effort into giving him lessons on how to speak, act, and over all look charming, so as to get what he needs through being a prostitute. (She hopes he'll find someone to work with him who is very strong, and thus can be used as a threat and will share in whatever her brother earns) Thinking whatever name I give him is not enoguh to charm people *coughShinobucough*, she wants him to change his name to Tsuki, which means moon and is far more attractive. She laso explains to him how to talk, hence how he speaks all poetically in the future.
Eventually he seperates from his family (Over dramatic death scenes are too overdone, so I'll make an overdramtic "Oh no, I'm lost and can't find them for teh rest of the plotline!" instead) and does get in an agreement with some boy who wil lact as his threat, and learns to be a good prostitute and enjoy it himself. His users wouldn't dare hurt him, else they'll answer to a stronger demon. (<--- BTW, for those wondering why the strong demon doesn't just go in by himself, perhaps he worries about gangs, or maybe just wants an easy life. Or likes having sex with Itsuki-chan as well. Something like that.) One of the biggest lessons his sister taught him was "Always do and say what your partner wants". Thus, when some user is into in and murmurs "Ah...Kimi wa ii, Tsuki-chan da yo..." (<--- Means "Oh... You're good, Tsuki-chan...) he hears incorrectly and uses the name "Itsuki" for her. Later, he talks to his friend about it, and rather liking the name, decides to stick with it. (<--- Cheap excuse.)
From there, I have rough ideas. (Hey, I only had two boring class periods to figure this out!) The uraotoko and him getting stronger will be needed, of course, and eventually meeting Shinobu, not even remembering where the name is from.
...You know, this idea is really out there. O.o Eh, tell me what you think, and please be polite and back it up with facts, as two boring class periods of work/shit should not be crushed/proved shitty without some good facts.