[FIC] Two Halves Make a Hole

[tsumetaitsubasa]

Sorry my dearest flist. Just ignore this if you please. <3

Title: Two Halves Make a Hole
Pairing(s): AmericaxEngland [slightly, if you squint]
Rating: PG
Warnings: Bit of killing intent, historical inaccuracies?
Summary: America wants to break it off. England is understandably confused.

Comments

[aki_bara]

Well, you're right that there was a split, but the side that went with England was actually called the loyalists. Maybe Royalist is another name I haven't heard before though?

Anyway.. It was very slanted towards an American viewpoint of the revolution, but, well, I really liked it! Plus, they always slant the history towards our side in the classroom, so, what are you going to do about it. Still, if you're thinking of making revisions you might want England to mention how the taxes were very small in comparison to what the people of England were paying, and that he needed the money because he was seriously broke after defending America in the French Indian War.

Still, loved the whole "I'm protecting you thing." I never really think about it, but that is so true how much England suffered in his youth and stuff, America never had to deal with that, so I really appreciated that insightful angle.

Thanks for the great read!

[tsumetaitsubasa]

Oh no! You're probably right. I don't think I actually checked but I guess it's always been in my head that they were called the Royalists. Thanks for the correction!

Definitely true. I had a biased education. Thanks for the critique, will definitely keep in mine and if I get off my lazy butt, I'll revise it.

f;alkd England is just so angsty. ♥

[aki_bara]

he really is a bit of an angst whore, isn't he? Maybe if he weren't so tsundere. *sigh*

[tsumetaitsubasa]

But ahhh;lk, it's really endearing. ♥

[aki_bara]

yeah, but he would have healthier relationships if he weren't. Gah! Igirisu, don't change a thing about you!