-Whining- Damn it. I needed to go to bed like, two hours ago. But the muses attacked. And they still don't want to leave. I wanna keep writing. Sleep isn't *that* important ... right?
Have I told you how much I love your Dustin/Shane? I don't think I have, but I really do. They are very amusing and cute. Wonderful lead in to them fighting. So if Jack is that scared of cats how is he so okay with Kat? Or is it because she's more humaniod? Sky was sweet in this and I loved the chase for the camera at the end, very domestic feeling. There were a few errors in spelling, spacing and " being at the end of a sentance where it's not needed...maybe just give it a quick edit when you have time. Loved this chapter...can't believe there was another one so quick after the last.
I love this. I love your explaination why they were at each other's throats in SWAT. The ending was great. XD Yes, we need a picture too. To go awwww...over. XD Great work.
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Just for that, you get this:
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