Bright Skies (Multi - Season Crossover/Power Rangers, prompt #52: Blue, T)

Jul 29, 2008 16:45


-Whining- I don't *wanna* go to work today ... I wanna keep writing. And hopefully produce something that I don't hate. >.<

On another note, I reread The Fink's Identiverse earlier, and came to the conclusion that if my Eric from Bright Skies ever met up with their Time Force Rangers, the only person he would probably trust would be Alex. -Is ( Read more... )

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m14mouse July 30 2008, 00:48:11 UTC
Wow...wonderful chapter. Soo...::pokes.:: Stop hating this chapter. Writers..like you and me are own worst critics. I smiled a little at the whole Jack/Sky interaction. I like how they are warming up to each other. And...::hugs Wes.:: Poor guy. But I love the whole interaction between him and Eric. Anyway, great work.

^___^

P.S: I have one of your bunnies. Please take him back before he drives my bunnies crazy.

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silverkat1620 July 30 2008, 03:58:21 UTC
There is nothing to hate about this chapter, you silly-billy! It's great. Heart wrenching, but great. I really love Sky and Jack (and Sky&Jack, but that's another story) and you have got the two of them down. And Wes' reaction was perfectly IC, too.

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rivulet027 July 30 2008, 04:16:23 UTC
You shouldn't hate this, it's fantastic. From the opening line to the suspense you ended it with. It's sometimes difficult to read reworked scenes from a show, but not here. You fit in the cannon lines with the world you've created here seamlessly. If anything you should be proud of it. I liked the reasoning behind making Sky blue. I like how you changed Sky's reason for wanting to be red. And of course I like Eric immediantly knowing that something was wrong with Wes and trying to help him.
Great update!

*sigh* One day I will get caught up in reviewing this. I know I'm behind. :)

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rosabelle July 30 2008, 08:17:28 UTC
Sky makes me cry (dammit, quit making me cry, you evil woman), wanting to be Red because he feels it's some sort of test of worth. It's so sad that he can't see how good he is at being Blue.

The interaction between Sky and Jack, and Wes and Eric, made me smile.

Love it! And you. ♥

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aisho_ren July 31 2008, 13:21:52 UTC
Poor Sky. But he and Jack are moving past their issues!

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