Bright Skies (Multi - Season Crossover/Power Rangers, prompt #26: Just Passing Through, T)

[tsukino_akume]

I managed to write for over twelve hours straight, and this is what came out of it. Thankfully, I made myself sleep and read over it again before I posted. ^.^;;

Author/: Tsukino Akume
Fandom/: Power Rangers Time Force moving into S.P.D., multiple Rangers from each season
Characters/: Wes (Time Force), multiple Rangers from other teams (Literally

Comments

[cmar_wingnut]

Lovely, really lovely. I smiled at the frantic preparations and the strip poker, and laughed at the description of Technicolor Tommy. But - how on Earth did Cole get wolf cubs for children? Or did I miss something?

The stilted conversation between Wes and Eric was painfully realistic, but I hope they get the opportunity to say something a little deeper than that.

Rambling plotlines ...

[tsukino_akume]

Thank you! I tried very hard to make this seem both pretty, and yet very PR-appropriate for a wedding. I'm always happy to know that my conversations are coming out well rather than cheesy. ^.^

It was awkward to try and work the explanation into the plot, but I liked the idea that even after Wild Force, Merrick kept that wolf pup that showed up while he was still Zen-Aku. Of course being that it's several years later, the pup has long ago grown up, started its own pack, and bred. And being that Cole and Merrick are now living together, they have wolves running around with all the other animals.

At some point, I hope to work Cole and Merrick into the plot again to explain that, but since they were literally 'just passing through' for these two chapters, it didn't quite work. If nothing else, I may end up with a one-shot because the idea just won't leave me alone.

[rosabelle]

Ooh, awkward moment there between Wes and Eric. But it's something, and I hope that they'll be able to talk more comfortably later on.

The Trini tribute was sweet. Nicely done.

Hey, let's play strip poker at our wedding! It'll be great!

[tsukino_akume]

Um ... I plead the fifth?

Thank you! I really tried to make it simple, but sincere. And the meaning of daffodils was so appropriate that I had to do it.

-Giggles- Yes! Strip poker it is!

::Looks at icon:: Well, it's yellow ^^

[lunaria_kitty]

::Squees again for adorable Rosa and Ruby pups:: Hee! ^^ They're just cute. ^^

I love sweet little Bridge. ♥

And the cat's finally outta the bag! ^^ Poor Kim though, she's having a rough time. >.<

Aww, I love that you honored Trini in there, very sweet. ♥

[rivulet027]

Wow, that was wonderful.

[lunaria_kitty]

Reading some more. *Grin* And we taking bathroom break before next chapter, so I figured I'd throw some commentage your way. ♥

Firstly, squee! I forgot about the Rosa and Ruby pups! Hee! They so adorable! And Bridge! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH! (And it's all because of you. He wasn't my favorite before this story. But now, he is LOVE. ♥ I'm betting he had a hand in getting Garrett in the ceremony too. *Grin* And who would deny Bridge anything that would make not only him happy, but someone else as well?

Well, Sis outta the bathroom, so I'll wrap this up. Much love for this story, and you always! ♥