Bright Skies (Multi - Season Crossover/Power Rangers, prompt #18: Joker, T)

[tsukino_akume]

Not sure how happy I am with this chapter, really. I can't find anything wrong with it, and I have no desire to change anything. But somehow I'm just not as ... pleased with how it came out. -Sighs- Hopefully the next will be better.

I'm also slightly bummed because no one caught on to the sub-plot that's going to be brought up here. I need to work

Comments

[silverkat1620]

So..... does this subplot have anything to do with Jack being called Jaz (is that short for something, btw)? Also, I love this storyline. You're doing great!

[aisho_ren]

It was awesome to see Wes talk about his concerns. Just one question. Is Jaz Jack?

[lunaria_kitty]

Hee! I like conversations like this. The ones that say so much but are between two people who aren't the closest with each other. You have a fabulous way of bringing rangers from different eras together.

The kids were just adorable in this chapter. It was fun to see Wes having a little fun with Sky.

And his issue was finally confronted (pointed out for all the slow ones like me). Maybe not beaten yet, but at least he's working on it. He loves Sky so much. And that just makes me all cuddly happy inside. ^^