Comments | tsuki_no_bara: the ghost of jack kerouac

tsuki_no_bara

the ghost of jack kerouac

Jan 04, 2007 14:36

this is the ghost story. it's part of the post-apocalypse 'verse that i may have mentioned but not actually written anything for, and takes place four days after the world breaks. credit where it's due to wikipedia, google, and googlemaps.

( There’s a ghost standing in downtown Lowell. )

the ghost of jack kerouac, misc fic, apocafic

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tsuki_no_bara January 4 2007, 20:10:56 UTC

^_^ thank you!

Wow. crotalus_atrox January 4 2007, 20:04:19 UTC

That's fantastic, especially your beautifully understated post-apocalypse. I love it dearly and want to see you do something more with this world.

Re: Wow. tsuki_no_bara January 4 2007, 20:12:42 UTC

apparently "apocalypse" for me means "make most of the world's population vanish in a puff of smoke." i like the idea of an abandoned world. i think you'd have to be a certain kind of personality to survive it well, tho.

also, thank you. :> i'm trying to write more.

Re: Wow. crotalus_atrox January 4 2007, 20:15:26 UTC

I like the soft, quiet weirdness. The plants eating the house. People trying to go on with what they know.

I'm glad. :D I shall prod at you to do so. This shall be my project until such time as you tell me to quit prodding.

Re: Wow. tsuki_no_bara January 4 2007, 20:33:08 UTC

well, i was planning to write more to submit to my writing group, and since the lack of plot is completely tripping me up - and i've clearly been reading too much of a certain style of fanfic, because i want to give as little background as possible and still make the story make sense - i'd never say no to some prodding. :D and would not tell you to stop.

byrne January 4 2007, 20:07:30 UTC

Oh man. Great story, Cindy. Well done.

*reads again*

tsuki_no_bara January 4 2007, 20:13:31 UTC

thank you! ^_^ i'm so pleased. now i just need to work in some monsters.

crotalus_atrox January 4 2007, 20:15:54 UTC

now i just need to work in some monsters.

um. YAY.

eudaimon January 4 2007, 20:19:08 UTC

I love it. But, then again, you know how I feel about darling Mr Kerouac :)

x

Re: Wow. tsuki_no_bara January 4 2007, 20:34:56 UTC

hey, is your laptop fixed?

but you're reading (and commenting on!) my fic. o.O are you feeling ok?

*ahem* thanks. :>

melantre January 4 2007, 21:30:24 UTC

ooooh, I'm liking this :0)

tsuki_no_bara January 5 2007, 01:53:35 UTC

cool, thank you. :>