fic: Tired of Being Tired

[tsuki_no_bara]

i feel like i spent a lot of this week not being able to sleep - either i couldn't fall asleep, or i couldn't stay asleep. i wrote this wednesday in my sleep-deprived frustration and just... didn't feel like posting it until now. but i want to post it before i collapse into bed, so.

Comments

[dear_tiger]

Aw, poor you! You caught insomnia from your character :D Insomnia sucks. I fully sympathize with Quince. And I was resisting the urge to yell at him the whole time that he's gonna have to pee like crazy after that much beer, and there goes his nice sleep. But it worked and he slept, so yay. Poor baby.

[tsuki_no_bara]

actually this time i think he caught it from me. >.< it totally failed to occur to me that he'd have to pee BEFORE bed, so i had it wake him up instead. i don't think he was asleep that long before his bladder went "HEY! WAKE UP! I'M FULL OF BEER! YOU NEED TO PEE!" fortunately it just woke him up enough to go to the bathroom, but not enough to stay up. he and jack may or may not have words about the beer later.

[bleodswean]

Great job capturing THAT feeling. This is such a complete piece. Nice!

[tsuki_no_bara]

thank you! it helped that i was kind of sleep-deprived and pissed off about it when i wrote this.

[ephemera]

Insomnia is the very bitch, and I have every sympathy for Quince - and you!

[tsuki_no_bara]

quince: IT SUCKS SO HARD.
jack: WAKE ME UP NEXT TIME.
quince: :p

it is unpleasant and i have great sympathy for anyone who suffers from it on a regular basis.