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tsu

Into the Darkness ~Chapter 7~

Mar 05, 2006 15:23

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason. *nods emphatically*
This is (almost) the end. It's the last chapter, anyway. Next comes the Epilogue.

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 7~
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threeonetwo March 6 2006, 01:50:05 UTC

...I LOVE YOU AND I WANT TO MARRY YOU AND HAVE YOUR CHILDREN AND I WOULD NOT MIND IN THE SLIGHTEST IF YOU MOLESTED AND MURDERED ME IN A VERY VERY SICK TWISTED AND VIOLENT WAY.

You. Are now my inspiration for writing. Holy flying fuck. Just. JesusAllahBuddha. That was. Oh man. Just. Ok. Ok.

You managed to pull this off while keeping them in character but showing how broken they both ended up and just WOAH FREAKIN' WOAH.

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-worships-

That is all.

tsu March 6 2006, 02:11:25 UTC

Calm thyself, mine daughter.

Seriously, though, don't make me your writing model. You want a GOOD writer, go read sockren, or cryoginia, or velvet_mace, or sky_dark, or mistr3ssquickly, or inugrlrayn or so many others that could so easily write circles around me.

threeonetwo March 6 2006, 02:19:29 UTC

...Yes, they are good writers. I love sky_dark's fics. And velvet_mace. And the others. Yes. As well as astyzia(sp?) and kytyngurl(I think...er, sp?).

But none of them have ever made me -vomit- when reading, which I nearly did at the end there. Though you have spelling and grammar errors, as for emotion, you win. Seriously.

...Is it a bad thing that I was somewhat turned on by the necrophilia, while still being horribly sickened by it?

tsu March 6 2006, 03:26:46 UTC

lol, I know I need a beta, I have a hard time editing my own writing. But... I would feel kinda bad about subjecting an innocent beta to this... thing.

tsu March 6 2006, 03:49:34 UTC

And yes, it is a bad thing. A bad, bad, wonderfully horrible thing.

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