And knowledge and tears and chancehope_calarisMarch 30 2011, 22:01:56 UTC
The night that Eduardo returns to Palo Alto, his girlfriend does worse than set a little fire: Christy nearly kills Eduardo. This is exactly the slap in the face Mark needs to get his act together and start acting like something resembling a human being.
Mostly I want Eduardo emotionally and physically scarred and Mark trying to help piece him back together.
OPTIONAL: If you're so inclined, I would love seeing Mark defend Eduardo against Sean's underhanded cruelties--and, of course, going after Christy with everything he has.
Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20a/20]hope_calarisMarch 30 2011, 22:07:27 UTC
[Oh my gosh. I'm sooo sorry for the long wait. I hit writer's block and nothing would fit anymore. On top of that homework and family celebrations -- which are awesome, but still --, time flew by. Anyway, here's the last chapter of the story. Hope you enjoy
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Re: Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20a/20]uenaApril 5 2011, 10:35:46 UTC
Hier bin ich wieder.
Voller schlechtem Gewissen, weil mir erst vor Kinkas Tür wieder eingefallen ist, dass ich dir dein Pflänzchen hätte mitbringen sollen.
Hoppla. Aber wie dem auch sei ...
“Hey,” Mark says gently and sits down next to Wardo on the bed, so close that they touch. Wardo looks unsure at him before he bends his head again, determined to study his shoes. “I’m not leaving, okay? Been there, done that -- it sucked. So, don’t make me leave again.” “I don’t want you to -- ” Wardo’s head snaps up in horror, then he sees the grin on Mark’s face.
Ein grinsender Mark? Es fällt mir absurd schwer, mir das überhaupt vozustellen. Dabei hab ich den Bengel schon grinsen sehen ... bloß eben nicht in der Mark-Version. Wenn du verstehst, was ich meine ...
Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20b/20]hope_calarisMarch 30 2011, 22:14:26 UTC
“Oh my God,” Wardo breathes when they enter the apartment his mom had bought (top floor, 24/7 security -- Mark absolutely has to buy that woman flowers
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Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20c/20]hope_calarisMarch 30 2011, 22:15:35 UTC
“How long are you staying?” Wardo asks between two bites.
“Two days … well, if you don’t mind?” Chris says. “We have a hotel on -- ”
“Hotel? No way. You can stay here. We have a second bedroom”, Wardo explains, and Mark forgets what he’s wanted to do with the tuna on the fork. He had kind of expected to sleep in the second bedroom, but unless Wardo wants him to take a hotel (which he doesn’t, Mark knows that) it means that …
“Oh,” he says, and Dustin has the audacity to laugh at him.
“I mean,” Wardo coughs and blushes a bit when he looks at Mark, “unless you don’t … ”
“No, don’t be silly.” And before … well, before everything, Mark would have probably taken the easy way out and said something along the lines of it’s less complicated for everyone this way, and it wouldn’t have meant a thing, but he wants to believe he has changed. “That would be great
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Re: Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20c/20]faelkchenMarch 31 2011, 08:53:10 UTC
Das Ende ist wirklich sehr, sehr schön geworden, so richtig zum seufzen und reinkuscheln. :) Und ich mag die Wohnung. :) Die Interaktion zwischen Chris und Dustin und den anderen ist super. :D Bin gespannt auf die Fortsetzung.
Re: Fill: And knowledge and tears and chance [Part 20c/20]herzausglasMarch 31 2011, 20:54:42 UTC
Das Ende schreit förmlich nach dem Sequel! Wir wollen jetzt alle wissen wie Wardo und Mark ihr neues Leben auf die Reihe kriegen und Christy noch mal sehen :D Ich würd gerne mal etwas konstruktiveres als den Fangirlie-Kram schreiben, aber mir fällt rückblickend nichts ein, was mir negativ aufgefallen wäre oder unlogisch gewesen wäre. Aber ein bisschen mehr Dustin und Chris fände ich im Sequel gut! ♥
Mostly I want Eduardo emotionally and physically scarred and Mark trying to help piece him back together.
OPTIONAL: If you're so inclined, I would love seeing Mark defend Eduardo against Sean's underhanded cruelties--and, of course, going after Christy with everything he has.
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Voller schlechtem Gewissen, weil mir erst vor Kinkas Tür wieder eingefallen ist, dass ich dir dein Pflänzchen hätte mitbringen sollen.
Hoppla. Aber wie dem auch sei ...
“Hey,” Mark says gently and sits down next to Wardo on the bed, so close that they touch. Wardo looks unsure at him before he bends his head again, determined to study his shoes. “I’m not leaving, okay? Been there, done that -- it sucked. So, don’t make me leave again.”
“I don’t want you to -- ” Wardo’s head snaps up in horror, then he sees the grin on Mark’s face.
Ein grinsender Mark? Es fällt mir absurd schwer, mir das überhaupt vozustellen. Dabei hab ich den Bengel schon grinsen sehen ... bloß eben nicht in der Mark-Version. Wenn du verstehst, was ich meine ...
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Also werde ich ihn auch knuddeln.
*KNUDDEL*
Dustin und Chris sind wie immer mehr als nur charmant, und Wardos Mutter hab ich inzwischen richtig lieb.
Haste gut gemacht!
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“Two days … well, if you don’t mind?” Chris says. “We have a hotel on -- ”
“Hotel? No way. You can stay here. We have a second bedroom”, Wardo explains, and Mark forgets what he’s wanted to do with the tuna on the fork. He had kind of expected to sleep in the second bedroom, but unless Wardo wants him to take a hotel (which he doesn’t, Mark knows that) it means that …
“Oh,” he says, and Dustin has the audacity to laugh at him.
“I mean,” Wardo coughs and blushes a bit when he looks at Mark, “unless you don’t … ”
“No, don’t be silly.” And before … well, before everything, Mark would have probably taken the easy way out and said something along the lines of it’s less complicated for everyone this way, and it wouldn’t have meant a thing, but he wants to believe he has changed. “That would be great ( ... )
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can't wait to read the sequel!!
Thanks for updates <3
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Bin gespannt auf die Fortsetzung.
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Ich würd gerne mal etwas konstruktiveres als den Fangirlie-Kram schreiben, aber mir fällt rückblickend nichts ein, was mir negativ aufgefallen wäre oder unlogisch gewesen wäre.
Aber ein bisschen mehr Dustin und Chris fände ich im Sequel gut! ♥
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Njihihihihi! Wundervoll!
Ganz, ganz tolles Ende!
(Und Wardo ist ein sneaky, sneaky bastard ... we have a second bedroom ... jaja ... geschickt eingefädelt ...)
Jetzt freu ich mich auf die Fortsetzung und drück dich ganz feste!
Tüddellüüü!
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the attack left me unable to read/comment my favs ç______ç
“I’m not leaving, okay? Been there, done that -- it sucked. So, don’t make me leave again.”
awwwwwww.... adorable line! Great work dear :)
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