quick note; GUYS. please be aware that if you posted a prompt in part six and it is now screened, i have posted them to the post already - so that you guys don't have to. thanks for being patient and making the fill-a-thon such a success
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This is really my favorite way of handling threesome porn -- you set up your protagonist's expectations and then you knock them down. Loved the twist where Sean was the one who ended up feeling vulnerable and hesitant. Though, obviously, because he's Sean he's going to go for it and never halt anything that seems good -- that's just crazy talk for weaker minds. lol. ILU Sean.
He feels. Inexperienced, and he never feels inexperienced.
But then he's also got that heady thrill he gets whenever he tries something new, like the feeling he got when he saw Facebook on that chick's email, when he met Mark, when he lost his virginity, at fourteen, in Jenny Swanson's basement.
asdflsa;gnrj;!! This was so perfect.
Really, your Sean characterization made me just so so happy across the board. And I loved your OFC. She had a personality and seemed like the kind of girl Sean would be dating. (comfortable with her sexuality, good at the banter, kind of almost too cool for him and likely to break up with him after a couple months - but in 'no hard feelings' way where they'd still email occasionally & later he'd go have drinks with her and her new boyfriend)
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omg i love that description of the OFC. they're just both kind of chilling, having fun. no strings attached. friends with benefits. AND ALL OF THOSE OTHER MOVIE TITLES.
basically! i am so glad you enjoyed!!! thank you! <33
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