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Re: FILL: I Never Did Anything Out of the Blue [2/2] leladancer18 March 26 2011, 08:16:41 UTC
This was so good.

I'm gonna quote some lines that stood out.

The noise Eduardo makes as he comes, so suddenly, is like a symphony. [I don't know why, but I felt like giggling at that line even though it's a good description] He smiles a small, self-satisfied smile; he wouldn’t be Mark Zuckerberg if he didn’t know how to punch Eduardo Saverin’s buttons. He doesn’t even care if Eduardo pulls out, walks away, and he’s left to jerk himself off in this dreary, darkened office with the carpet burning his knees - he’s won a little victory again. Not a big one, but he’s still unmistakably won.

Mark allows himself to look at Eduardo’s reflection for the first time, half-visible in the flickering light, and his face seems almost serene, content, eyes shut, his body slumped against him, fingers idly playing with the corner of his hoodie. For a moment - for a heartbeat - it’s almost like he can see what they could have been, and it hits his heart like a suckerpunch.

Then his eyes snap open, black as pitch, and it’s gone.

[such sadness...]

Thanks for this.

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Re: FILL: I Never Did Anything Out of the Blue [2/2] leladancer18 March 27 2011, 13:37:33 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥ I'm glad what I intended came across.

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