Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (6/6! :D) {NSFW-ishhh}slasher48May 5 2011, 14:11:17 UTC
Mark’s voice is probably the hottest thing Eduardo’s ever heard when he murmurs,
“I wasn’t stopping you, and if you intend to try again, I won’t stop you then either.”
It’s husky and dark and loose somehow, not as jagged and terse as it usually is, and something in Eduardo’s belly shivers just getting to hear it so close, so because of him. Smiling, he nudges his nose into Mark’s and mumbles,
“Good, because I want to see everything I missed not taking your clothes off, and getting you to shower with me seems like it would kill two birds with one stone.”
Mark shakes his head, probably at how Eduardo is mothering him again, even after what they’ve just done, but nonetheless smiles a little, arches his back in a breathtaking way and sits up with Eduardo to pull his shirt over his head and toss it away from him.
“Whatever, Wardo. Just, if I catch you trying to clean between my toes, I’m out of there.”
Eduardo chuckles and then, pulling himself up off the sofa, yanks Mark onto his feet and up against his body, pressing his still wet fingers down the back of Mark’s sweats along the sweat-damp crease of his ass, and whispering over the skin of Mark’s jaw,
“I’ll be a little busy cleaning here. Very, very thoroughly.”
Mark groans a little and clutches at Eduardo’s arm where it’s around his waist, his eyelashes fluttering closed just the tiniest bit before he shoves him away and half-glares, stalking toward the stairs with a sharp,
“That’s acceptable, I guess.”
And if Eduardo trembles a little as he shoves his slacks and briefs down off of his hips and goes to fold them on top of his bag, if he smiles like a fucking idiot all the way up the stairs after ripping off his shirt and kicking off his socks, if he stops for a moment and stifles a hysterical giggle when he hears Mark’s tuneless humming while he sets up the shower through the bathroom door, well.
Once Eduardo gets under the water and presses Mark against the tile in reach of the spray, his hand cupping Mark’s ass as Mark’s hands - those goddamned fucking hands - grip his sides, their mouths sealed together so tight not even the steam can get in, neither of them will be worrying about that.
Turnabout is fair play. THANK YOU casey_sms FOR LISTENING TO THIS WHILE I WROTE IT AND NOT CALLING ME CRAZY. LIKEWISE WITH MY OTHER SILENT, SEXCELLENT-GUSHING BIGGEST FAN/GUARDIAN. I LOVE YOU BOTH SO MUCHLY. BEST ENABLERS EVER, YOU AND callmejude WHO GOT TEASED MERCILESSLY WITH THIS TOO, BAHAHA. :HUGS YOU ALL:
AND TO MY WIFE, MY DARLING BEAUTIFUL GENIUS OF A BRIDE. I LOVE YOU DEARLY AND I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED MY GIFT! XOXOXOXO
Re: Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (6/6! :D) {NSFW-ishhh}callmejudeMay 5 2011, 14:17:41 UTC
CAN I JUST SAY, AS SOMEONE WITH A SEVERE HANDKINK, THAT THIS IS EVERYTHING IT EVER NEEDED TO BE AND MORE.
I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
UGH.
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I'D COPY-PASTE LITTLE BITS THAT I LIKED BUT THEN IT WOULD BE THE WHOLE THING AND I PROBABLY NEED SLEEP BUT MY GOD AM I GLAD I STAYED UP FOR THIS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OMG.
Re: Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (6/6! :D) {NSFW-ishhh}takethewordsMay 6 2011, 06:08:20 UTC
YOU POSTED THIS THE DAY BEFORE MY BIRTHDAY!!! HOW DID YOU KNOWWW? Ugh bb you are the absolute best. This whole thing was fabulous, and sexy, and in character and ugh. I CAN'T EVEN OKAY JUST. ILU MORE THAN WORDS. <333333333333333
Re: Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (6/6! :D) {NSFW-ishhh}casey_smsMay 6 2011, 12:54:02 UTC
OMG. THE TOES THE TOES ALWAYS DO IT FOR ME. YOU WILL GIVE ME A TOE FETISH.
I LOVE LISTENING TO YOU. IT IS LIKE A DIRECT SHOT OF PORN, IT IS SO GOOD. I AM SHATTERED BY THE MINDBLOWING ORGASM I JUST HAD IN MY MIND.
I love the clothes still on. Your details always do it for me.
And you thought you might be rusty. You definitely are not anymore. You are like the opposite of that. Like...well oiled. AIN'T THAT AN IMAGE. Just a lovely read.
Re: Fill Part Two: The Aftermath of Shattered Perception (6/6! :D) {NSFW-ishhh}leladancer18May 6 2011, 15:29:16 UTC
You are uncompromisingly wonderful; that's what it comes down to. It's the characterization of Mark and Eduardo. You seem to have a firm grasp of who they are and stick to that in your writing. It's the description, details, and well, the sex...so great. I'd ask you to please never stop writing, but I don't think you will either way. I hope I gave a long enough review, bb.
“I wasn’t stopping you, and if you intend to try again, I won’t stop you then either.”
It’s husky and dark and loose somehow, not as jagged and terse as it usually is, and something in Eduardo’s belly shivers just getting to hear it so close, so because of him. Smiling, he nudges his nose into Mark’s and mumbles,
“Good, because I want to see everything I missed not taking your clothes off, and getting you to shower with me seems like it would kill two birds with one stone.”
Mark shakes his head, probably at how Eduardo is mothering him again, even after what they’ve just done, but nonetheless smiles a little, arches his back in a breathtaking way and sits up with Eduardo to pull his shirt over his head and toss it away from him.
“Whatever, Wardo. Just, if I catch you trying to clean between my toes, I’m out of there.”
Eduardo chuckles and then, pulling himself up off the sofa, yanks Mark onto his feet and up against his body, pressing his still wet fingers down the back of Mark’s sweats along the sweat-damp crease of his ass, and whispering over the skin of Mark’s jaw,
“I’ll be a little busy cleaning here. Very, very thoroughly.”
Mark groans a little and clutches at Eduardo’s arm where it’s around his waist, his eyelashes fluttering closed just the tiniest bit before he shoves him away and half-glares, stalking toward the stairs with a sharp,
“That’s acceptable, I guess.”
And if Eduardo trembles a little as he shoves his slacks and briefs down off of his hips and goes to fold them on top of his bag, if he smiles like a fucking idiot all the way up the stairs after ripping off his shirt and kicking off his socks, if he stops for a moment and stifles a hysterical giggle when he hears Mark’s tuneless humming while he sets up the shower through the bathroom door, well.
Once Eduardo gets under the water and presses Mark against the tile in reach of the spray, his hand cupping Mark’s ass as Mark’s hands - those goddamned fucking hands - grip his sides, their mouths sealed together so tight not even the steam can get in, neither of them will be worrying about that.
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Turnabout is fair play. THANK YOU casey_sms FOR LISTENING TO THIS WHILE I WROTE IT AND NOT CALLING ME CRAZY. LIKEWISE WITH MY OTHER SILENT, SEXCELLENT-GUSHING BIGGEST FAN/GUARDIAN. I LOVE YOU BOTH SO MUCHLY. BEST ENABLERS EVER, YOU AND callmejude WHO GOT TEASED MERCILESSLY WITH THIS TOO, BAHAHA. :HUGS YOU ALL:
AND TO MY WIFE, MY DARLING BEAUTIFUL GENIUS OF A BRIDE. I LOVE YOU DEARLY AND I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED MY GIFT! XOXOXOXO
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I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
UGH.
-CLING-
I'D COPY-PASTE LITTLE BITS THAT I LIKED BUT THEN IT WOULD BE THE WHOLE THING AND I PROBABLY NEED SLEEP BUT MY GOD AM I GLAD I STAYED UP FOR THIS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OMG.
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ahhhhh it was so fun to read. thanks for that. :)
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I LOVE LISTENING TO YOU. IT IS LIKE A DIRECT SHOT OF PORN, IT IS SO GOOD. I AM SHATTERED BY THE MINDBLOWING ORGASM I JUST HAD IN MY MIND.
I love the clothes still on. Your details always do it for me.
And you thought you might be rusty. You definitely are not anymore. You are like the opposite of that. Like...well oiled. AIN'T THAT AN IMAGE. Just a lovely read.
Thanks for writing and sharing this <3
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