[PART NINE] & Some News

[oresteia]

Okay, I'm a little new at this so sorry if I mess this up first go. Because it's been 5 months since the last round even though we haven't been busy. I figured I might as well earn my keep and try to get this place alive again...

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Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

He kept licking even when Eduardo's hips twitched away from the pressure of his ass against them, kept at it until Eduardo sat up and said, "I wanna-" And then he flipped Mark over, settled him back on his elbows, and shoved his hand into the waistband of his pants. Mark swore under his breath and strained up into the touch.

Eduardo jacked him off with a practiced confidence Mark would be sure to subtly interrogate him about later. His fingers scrambled against Eduardo's chest until, frustrated and out of breath, he jerked Eduardo in by his shirt and fastened his mouth to Eduardo's neck. He sucked and nibbled as Eduardo stroked him, the slick sound of it all loud and beautiful to Mark's ears. And then when Mark's vision was whiting out around the edges, he tugged Mark up with a hand in his curls and slid his thumb into Mark's mouth, and Mark came against his own stomach, fingers tangled inside Eduardo's fleece jacket, trying in vain to find bare skin.

Eduardo collapsed next to him in a tangle of long limbs. Without giving it much though, Mark leaned over and sucked Eduardo's bottom lip into his mouth, gave it a nip, and then rolled into him, tossed an arm over Eduardo's chest and buried his nose in the crook of Eduardo's neck. After a moment, Eduardo's arm wrapped around Mark's waist and snaked under his t-shirt, the fingers of other hand playing with the curls at the nape of Mark's neck.

"Hey," he said suddenly. "Do you think Dustin heard that?"

"I don't give a shit," Mark mumbled, because he'd happily give Dustin a repeat performance in a few hours if Eduardo would only shut the hell up and let him sleep right now, on the carpet in front of his desk with come drying on his stomach, Eduardo's fingers tracing letters against his skin.

He drifted off to the sound of Eduardo's laughter.

Ugh, please ignore my anon fail.

Hopefully this is something around what you wanted, OP. I'll probably clean it up and repost it in a day or two.

OP!

[rumpledlinen]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, this is fantastic! :D

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[slasher48]

This is so fucking hot. Not even just porn hot (which oh my god it IS), but like, very intimate and realistic and it feels like it could totally have gone down.

(Of course, in my head this means it's AU and no bad shit ever happens, nope...)

I love the sandwich-feeding and I love the thumb-sucking and I love the grinding (holy hell, the GRINDING) and I love the friendship underlying their every move and your dialogue is perfect and--

:pauses to catch breath:

--I just LOVE this. It's so fucking well done. ♥

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

I loved this so much!

Your characterization is flawless.

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

that was perfectly hot and in character! great job.

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[jasmasson]

<3

Re: Do They Tremble (4/4)

[anonymous]

I just wanted to tell you that you have become one of my favorite TSN writers. I love the ways you explore their dynamic and your characterization is always spot-on.

♥

[anonymous]

That is so incredibly sweet that I have no idea how to respond other than to just say, you know, thank you so, so much for that compliment! That means a lot to me.

Writer Here!

[anonymous]

Thank you all so much for your comments! I would respond to all six of you but I don't want to spam any trackers or people using flat view. So I'll say here that I'm so happy you guys liked it, and if anybody wants to read it elsewhere, it's been reposted to my journal and AO3.