"Between the Buried and Me"

Feb 07, 2005 04:56

Title: Between the Buried and Me ( Read more... )

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the_dala February 7 2005, 05:34:46 UTC
Oh. Oh, awesome.

Jack...::whimpers::

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tseek_unique February 8 2005, 02:07:43 UTC
I decided to introduce an extra kick of the supernatural here. Let me know how it works. Thanks as always for reviewing.

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aradiria February 7 2005, 06:41:41 UTC
*wails* JAAAAAAACCKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pout*
And so he dreamt of a jade stone tied in the midst of braids, and dark eyes so cunning, so playful, yet never so beautiful as when they were alight with the fire of love. He fetched Jonah’s drawing of Jack and himself from a drawer and gazed at it. He touched Jack’s image gently.

“Hopelssly in love with you, Jack,” whispered James. “Please hold on for me.”

Wonderful. Nyrgh, very very good.

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tseek_unique February 8 2005, 02:09:36 UTC
I'm so glad you like those parts! I keep reaching for the tender lover in James. Thank you very much.

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b_c_hawk February 7 2005, 08:43:41 UTC
Please, no! Not Jack!

*flails and whimpers*

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tseek_unique February 8 2005, 02:14:53 UTC
There, there! *pats-comforts* Sometimes a little pirate abuse is necessary to further the plot. Thanks so much for following.

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cymbeline February 7 2005, 11:10:40 UTC
Jack took his hand and pressed it to his own breast. Jonah shook his head and jerked his hand away.

“I’m dyin’ already, Jonah. Ye ‘ave foreseen this. You must steer this ship into th’ storm an’ say the words

:::sob::: I need some kleenex now! Just beautiful, but so sad.

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tseek_unique February 8 2005, 02:16:53 UTC
One industrial-sized box of Kleenex is on the way. Hmmm. Better make that two boxes. Thanks for commenting. Hope to hold your interest!

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lyricl February 8 2005, 13:29:35 UTC
I'm considering crying...Think I should wait though. Amazing, per usual, especially with the heavy undercurrents of both Jack's ailment and Jonah's link to the fey. Vaguely unseelie, almost, v. cool. Can't wait for the next part.

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tseek_unique February 8 2005, 13:51:41 UTC
Yes, you should wait, me dear. There will plenty of time for tears later! I will reserve Kleenex for everybody. :) Your comments are very much appreciated.

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