Oh my... Wonderful sequel to a wonderful fic! I loved the Egyptian references and Jonah's speeches! And you intrigued me from the beginning with Jack's undecidedness. I pitied him because he was struggling between Will and James and couldn't get out. Poor Jack! And poor James, at that! I'm very glad they found each other at the end, though.
Major worship for the scene in which "Jonah" tries to seduce James. James standing firm and making a scene afterwards was so brilliant! And the end, where he threatens to shove the necklace up the prince's arse, made me giggle out loud!
I adore this universe! And I daresay Captain Jonah Sparrow is the most brilliant, authentic and intriguing original character in the history of PotC fanfiction - or fanfiction in general.
Thank you very much for commenting! *bows* *offers rum* I'm relieved you enjoyed this story as it wandered so far into supernatural/historical themes. I wanted to capture some of Jonah's pain in this story. I think we might see more of Ahmose in the future. *ponders* Your comments are greatly appreciated. :) By the way, I took your advice and archived the "When Shadows Fall" series under my memories. I accidently lost all the comments in the first chapter, but live and learn! If you check it out, make sure the drop down box is set to "journal." Otherwise, the first chapter may appear at the end! *hugs*
Thanks for the hug! Whew! Found that I left one installment out of the When Shadows Fall entries-- got them fixed now. Remember to sort them by "journal"-- I hope it makes sense now (and anyone will tell you that I'm no good when it comes to sense! ;)
Oh - sense? What's that? Never heard it before in my life! ;) At the moment, I'm a bit too busy with other stuff to read fanfiction (maybe you read about my FiWriMo), but I'll be glad to read the fic soon! :D
Major worship for the scene in which "Jonah" tries to seduce James. James standing firm and making a scene afterwards was so brilliant! And the end, where he threatens to shove the necklace up the prince's arse, made me giggle out loud!
I adore this universe! And I daresay Captain Jonah Sparrow is the most brilliant, authentic and intriguing original character in the history of PotC fanfiction - or fanfiction in general.
*bows and worships*
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Ahem. Where was I?
I'm intrigued about the prospect of more Ahmose! Weaving the past and the present together like you do it is brilliant!
I'm glad you archived the fic! Will try to save and read it within this week! :) *hugs back* Yay, hugs!
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At the moment, I'm a bit too busy with other stuff to read fanfiction (maybe you read about my FiWriMo), but I'll be glad to read the fic soon! :D
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