Help a nigga out

Apr 13, 2005 17:18

Hello to all my adoring fans. I hope all is well with eveyone. For those who don't know I have been in a writing drought(when it comes to songs) lately. Then while I was sitting in my Geometry class things suddenly began flowing again. So I am going to type out my two newest songs. If you happen to stumble upon this, please comment and be brutally honest. If you love it tell me, if you think I should never write another song again tell me. Although I think Niraj and Spruiell are the only two who will definatey read this, I want whoever does to try to get others to read it, so I can know if I'm back or if my lyrics are wack. Speaking of Niraj on the second song I need your help. After you read it see if you can dream up a chorus you feel would fit or possibly even a second verse. Now I say Niraj, but actually it is an open invitation to whoever reads this entry. I only say Niraj because I know of his writing talents. Ight enough of this extracurricular stuff lets get to the music. The first song is titled I'm Missing You. I wrote this so it would flow with the specific melody I composed so the words I chose flow with it.
I'm Missing You
Since I've lost you baby, I don't know what to do. The birds ain't singing, the sun ain't shining, and the sky don't look so blue. I know you were tired of the wrong I was partaking of. But girl I need you back, because I'm missing your love. We don't need to be apart, we don't need any space. I'm crying every night, because I'm missing your pretty face. Us parting ways, it wasn't my choice. Through my dreams at night, all I hear is your voice. Baby I'm so lost, I don't know what I'm gonna' do. In case you couldn't tell, baby I'm missing you.
Chorus
Girl I'm missing you. I know you miss me to. You stay on my mind. Because you are one of a kind. So girl this is my plea. I really need you so come back to me. Please don't go away. I think about you everyday.
Verse 2
I remember the first day we met. I knew you'd be the one I never would forget. Because when we were face to face so we could meet. All I did was look at you and my heart skipped a beat. Girl I apologize, for all the things I've done. I'm trying ot tell you now, in my heart you'll forever be number one So baby tell me this, can things go back to the way they were. Cause baby you gotta' know, I'm in love with you not with her. I've loved you from the start, baby girl I thought you knew, I just hope you know, I am missing you.
Chorus
Girl I'm missing you. I know you miss me to. You stay on my mind. Because you are one of a kind. So girl this is my plea. I really need you so come back to me. Please don't go away. I think about you everyday.

Ok that's song one. Now song two is incomplete and it is the song I am asking for help on. All I have is one verse. This song is the polar opposite of the previous one. The last song I fucked up, but now the shoe is on the other foot. It is called Feelings Change.

Feelings Change
I remember when I saw you. all I took was one glance. I had to go and talk to you. All I had, was that one chance. So I approached you so smoothly, and asked you "Can I have this dance". I tried to be the first man in your life, to show you true romance. Now that special moment is frozen in time. I wish I could forget it, because your someone else's your not mine. You know I used to love you so much. But now I've forgotten your touch. I wish, I could get you out of me head. I wish, I would have cheated on you instead. I don't love you, because you have destroyed my heart. I thought you were the one, but you couldn't fit the part. These thoughts I'm having girl they feel so strange, but now I know why, it's because feelings change.

That's all I have and I could really use some help finishing it. So please let me know if you were feeling the songs at all.
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