Alexander fic: Worthy of Your Soul (2/WIP)

May 02, 2006 19:29

Title: Worthy of Your Soul (2/WIP)

Author: trust_n0_1
Rating: PG to NC17 for the series (this chapter PG)
Summary: Hephaistion is asked by Philip to spy on Alexander and finds himself between a rock and a hard place.
Copyright: © Trust No One March 2006
Beta by: My one and only best-est tinuvielas

Worthy of Your Soul 2/WIP )

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selket56 May 2 2006, 11:13:40 UTC
Okay, did you have to stop just then? Why, why why???? I want more, you can't just leave it like that, hanging, I'll not be able to sleep at all until I know what happened. Great suspense to this story, I really like it. I also feel sooo for Hephaistion, your earlier scene really showed how hard his life might have been and perhaps was a forerunner of what it would be like later on. Just forget about TF and finish this!!! (kidding, sort of... Please!!!)

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trust_n0_1 May 2 2006, 12:04:01 UTC
Hmmmm, should I forget about TF and just write? I'm crazy enough for that. But then, my trusted beta will be there and this story is not going anywhere fast without her. So. I'm very happy that the suspense is coming through and I'm working on the next chapter so that I might finish it before next week.
Thank you :))))

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mlygia May 2 2006, 14:47:46 UTC
Well, what a beautiful tramp you created to arrest the poor Hephaistion. It was not enough that he have refused to spy Alexander for Phillip? How Philip can force him to obey? Will we have to wait to next week?

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trust_n0_1 May 2 2006, 23:54:57 UTC
Thank you! I have the next chapter in rough draft and I'm hoping to be able to post it next week. Thanks for your support :)

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qaddafi May 2 2006, 18:51:57 UTC
Please don't make Philip the bad guy. The story continues to be interesting, and I have random Ptolemy love in this chapter.

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trust_n0_1 May 2 2006, 23:58:50 UTC
Lol, I'm trying, really really hard, since I also like Philip. Random Ptolemy love is good, I'm planning on including him later on as well.

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looking forward to more! joyeee May 2 2006, 21:06:20 UTC
Hi, I first read your stories on fanfiction.net - you always handle the relationships between the characters so well, and this is no exception! Hephaestion may not yet be a master of diplomacy, but he's smart enough to know when he's being backed into a corner, to read Philip's expressions. All the foreshadowing of the future envy of the others is very nice. And the last scene, with Alexander suddenly showing up, was - ! For a moment I dared to hope that Alexander had overheard Hephaestion's declaration of loyalty, but unfortunately it doesn't seem so! Please continue soon - if you ever need anyone else to bug you to finish the stories I'll be glad to!

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Re: looking forward to more! trust_n0_1 May 2 2006, 23:56:53 UTC
Oh, things won't let up for Hephaistion just yet. Quite the contrary, I dare say. And it would have been all be too nice and simple if Alexander had overheard Hephaistion, wouldn't it? %
Thanks for your support!

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angstman May 2 2006, 22:00:09 UTC
Great work I love this udpate... Heph decide what his best and Phillip is Phillip, he will not playing game with kid and will get whatever the king demand. I doubt too that what Heph will tell Alexander about this coincidence why he come to meet Phillip in the early morning. Please update soon..

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trust_n0_1 May 2 2006, 23:57:38 UTC
Thank you. When it rains, it pours. This will get worse, I'm afraid.

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