Hot Icing

Feb 01, 2008 23:14

Title: Hot Icing
Author: Swirling_Dreams
Warnings: Rape, fisting, mutilation, WTFery
Fandom: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Author's Summary: The first ever in the history of a ZHOAXYUE FANFICTION! Set during the time of the seige of the North Pole, Zhoa gets his way past the guards and finds Yue. Rape
Why My Eyes Bled: Zhao spelled through the entire fic as "Zhoa," some truly bizarre but ineffective attempts at sadism, and general fuxxor'd mechanics.

A few choice quotes:

He had had a dream about raping someone, so he had many ideas about what to do that he needed to try.

Because otherwise, he just couldn't figure it out. Cock goes where?

"I thought lets have some fun tonight with her, I am exceptionally bored on my ship Princess Yue. Tomorrow, you will carry my seed in your womb, you will be sore in places you didn’t know you had, your pussy will bleed from your nether lips even though it is not your period” he paused, ripped off her underwear suddenly, threw it across the room, and searched her nether lips for blood with his fingers. “And the back of your womb will have my name sketched on it, and your virgin wall will have fallen princess, you shall carry admiral Zhoa’s seeds and the words admiral Zhoa will be sketched in your womb.” he finished.

Apparently, the womb-sketching was good enough to be said twice in the same sentence. I can just see Zhao in front of the mirror every morning practicing. "I will sketch my name on your womb. That's right. With my penis. I will tape a pencil to it and penetrate your cervix. Then....I write." Sadly, his dick's writing is somewhat illegible, but a gynecologist later found something that might have been "admirel zhoa wuz heer."

But before you write this off as just another poorly-written rapefic, I give you this epic line:

She tossed her head back and forth with each moan and kicked her legs with what little strength she had, forcing her naked womanhood into his pants.

Now that's a helpful rape victim!
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