Bingo Drabble: "Beyond Doubt" (BSG)

Sep 19, 2010 02:01

Title: Beyond Doubt
Characters: Gaeta
Pairings: none
Rating: teen

Written for Drabble Bingo, the prompt being "beyond the red line." My card is here, if anybody wants to have a look.

Beyond Doubt )

genre: action/mission, bsg fic, drabble, gaeta

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lls_mutant September 19 2010, 01:34:57 UTC
Very nice! I love it- especially the confidence.

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trovia September 23 2010, 20:37:02 UTC
Thanks! It's fun to give him some confidence in his abilities.

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trovia September 23 2010, 20:37:53 UTC
Thanks! It's such a curious moment in time. I'd have liked to see him on screen then, even if it was just a moment.

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kappamaki33 September 19 2010, 22:20:22 UTC
Excellent drabble! Interesting contrast, and a cool interpretation of the prompt.

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trovia September 23 2010, 20:38:49 UTC
Thank you. :) It was a challenge to come up with something not set in the mini. That would have been too easy. ;)

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millari September 20 2010, 15:14:41 UTC
This is awesome. I love how it feels almost like a poem. I love the rhythm of it, the short lines and phrases feeling like little chants Felix is telling himself in the mirror to convince himself to make this leap into the unknown, which must have been hard for someone like Felix.

A deceptively simple-looking drabble that is really multi-layered, this is a great addition to the growing collection of bingo fic!

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trovia September 23 2010, 20:39:44 UTC
Thank you. Though I'm still not quite sure whether it's such a good drabble. ;) But it was certainly a fun thing to do with the prompt.

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