for usakeh, also in honor of her graduation (go, you!): Casey, while delirious with malaria-induced fever, says something romantic to Chuck. Casey/Chuck, teen, no spoilers. ~ 150 words.
Oooh prompts! Cool! :) Okay. I never say no to prompts. I can give you many prompts, too. Yeah, and I know how much medication sucks, so don't feel like you have to write any of them if it doesn't work out. Remember it'll get better. It always does. Brain isn't meant to act up forever. *hugs
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I especially like the second one, which is gripping and disturbing and sad to imagine. I loved what you did with the image of the pool of blood moving closer and closer to Casey, and how you paired it with his observation that the assassin's first priority is to escape before the blood metaphorically taints them. Nice bit of symbolism there. Casey seems so dissociative, it's a bit creepy, but in a good way.
The day on the farm one made me laugh, but then it turned so sweet at the end. I liked that. Are they supposed to already be a couple in the ficlet? They kind of sounded like one, especially the way Chuck was like, "You're not dying".
The other one is just pure, bantery fun. I like though how it's not just PWP, but that Chuck is finding out stuff about himself at the same time. And LOL to the line about Big Mike. ;)
Oh, and if you're going to keep writing Chuck fic, I guess I need to break down and get an icon damnit. ;)
Loved the first one, especially. Yummy, with the image of the vice grip on his hips, panting against the wall... The second one - that left my heart in a puddle. Well done!
Oh, I love your drabbles. They're excellent. I love the humor in the first one- hair like a European mink? That's hilarious, and oddly specific- and the second is hot.
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I especially like the second one, which is gripping and disturbing and sad to imagine. I loved what you did with the image of the pool of blood moving closer and closer to Casey, and how you paired it with his observation that the assassin's first priority is to escape before the blood metaphorically taints them. Nice bit of symbolism there. Casey seems so dissociative, it's a bit creepy, but in a good way.
The day on the farm one made me laugh, but then it turned so sweet at the end. I liked that. Are they supposed to already be a couple in the ficlet? They kind of sounded like one, especially the way Chuck was like, "You're not dying".
The other one is just pure, bantery fun. I like though how it's not just PWP, but that Chuck is finding out stuff about himself at the same time.
And LOL to the line about Big Mike. ;)
Oh, and if you're going to keep writing Chuck fic, I guess I need to break down and get an icon damnit. ;)
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Casey/Chuck - Casey showing Chuck how to successfully aim and fire a gun and in the process, Chuck finds out just how much Casey likes his guns. ;)
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The second one - that left my heart in a puddle.
Well done!
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The first one was absolutely perfect, and just when I let my guard down while reading number two, there was number three. Evil.
But very good.
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The third killed me. Oh, Casey.
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