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Re: Evil!Sam/Tron/Clu - part FIFTEEN - LAST PART. WARNING NC-17 anonymous September 20 2011, 08:48:35 UTC
The flow of energy between the programs was erratic for a while; then the orange light gleamed and began to stream unobstructed. Both programs trembled; a last tear rolled down on Tron’s cheek and a new expression appeared on his face - total defeat. Sam was breathless; almost there. Clu’s other hand released Tron’s wrists and slipped under the lying program head. Clu bent ahead and leant his forehead against Tron’s. Suddenly every look that had seemed to be carved on the system administrator program’s face - arrogance, coldness, ruthlessness - disappeared and gave its place to vulnerability. Now the program looked terrifyingly human, startlingly Kevin Flynn. The golden light was glimmering. Clu moved and kissed the other program on the lips. Sam saw a flash of light and Tron tensed under him, around him unbearably. The boy cried out and came violently, his whole body was shaking. Waves of release followed each other in a streak that seemed to be never ending. Sam felt his muscles straining and his eyes clenched shut. Then the overwhelming ecstasy eased and gave place to satisfied stillness. Sam opened his eyes. Tron was shutting down: he eluded from the agony at last. His face was peaceful now. Clu’s hand was still resting on his chest; the confusingly human expression was clearing off of his face rapidly.

Sam pulled out and arranged his suit, yet he stayed there, leant over Tron. It’s done. He claimed his due; it was not hard at all and he was ready to take the rest. To take the company. To replace the system and start working on it - and extend it eventually, as his father had planned it, to better the world with the inventions of the Grid. Only he would not betray the idea and his companions as his father had done it.

Clu turned and looked at Sam. His face was stern and serious, with no hint of accompliceship or familiarity.

“Sam Flynn” he said. “Your transport to the portal is waiting for you.”

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Re: Evil!Sam/Tron/Clu - part FIFTEEN - LAST PART. WARNING NC-17 anonymous September 21 2011, 01:05:48 UTC
Thank you so much for reading, I am very happy you liked it!

The gap between the events in the arena and the last scene - yes. While the whole thing is open to interpretation, I think Tron's post-stroke post-Rinzler symptoms were caused by the rejection of the reprogramming and that made him act like a bit. Also, he'd been so crazy about Users - would a User jump at him like here, I totally see Tron freezing.

Thank you for the wonderful feedback! Now I just have to deal with the full AU that had been built in my head around the story while I was writing. :)

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Re: Evil!Sam/Tron/Clu - part FIFTEEN - LAST PART. WARNING NC-17 anonymous September 20 2011, 22:56:37 UTC
Ouch! That was painful, so emotionally raw. But good!

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Re: Evil!Sam/Tron/Clu - part FIFTEEN - LAST PART. WARNING NC-17 anonymous September 21 2011, 01:06:28 UTC
Thank you so much for reading, I am thrilled you liked it!

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