Claps excitedly
Yay 200 pages for Freelander! My 'editing' has yeiled at least 30 more pages since I first began. And since I am trying to keep my chapters between 5-10 pages I've also added about 5 more chapters.
I've been trying to flesh out a couple of plot holes that I had when I started and adding a little more substance to some of the chapters. I really have no idea if I'm making it better or worese but whatever! Not like I know what I'm doing anyway :-p
Its also officially more popular then Brothers Blood on Fictionpress but I imagine that might be more to do with my keeping the chapters shorter. Brothers Blood routinely had chapters that were 10 pages or more. Lets face it average person reading on a website like fictionpress isn't gonna read things like that :-p I actually have 4 whole comments on Freelander and the hits are greater.
With the way this story is going it might actualy wind up being a trilogy when all is said and done but we'll see. So far I have yet to start on the sequel. The idea's are there but they haven't fleshed themselves out enogh to put on paper.
Make it stop daddy! :-p
I've been trying to flesh out a couple of plot holes that I had when I started and adding a little more substance to some of the chapters. I really have no idea if I'm making it better or worese but whatever! Not like I know what I'm doing anyway :-p
Its also officially more popular then Brothers Blood on Fictionpress but I imagine that might be more to do with my keeping the chapters shorter. Brothers Blood routinely had chapters that were 10 pages or more. Lets face it average person reading on a website like fictionpress isn't gonna read things like that :-p I actually have 4 whole comments on Freelander and the hits are greater.
With the way this story is going it might actualy wind up being a trilogy when all is said and done but we'll see. So far I have yet to start on the sequel. The idea's are there but they haven't fleshed themselves out enogh to put on paper.
Make it stop daddy! :-p