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Fic: Sometimes

Mar 31, 2006 10:23

Challenge: Fleur, Viktor and Cedric decide that if Harry wants to be a champion, he has to prove he's as good as a 17 year-old.
Title: Sometimes
Author: Aviss
Beta: earwenr
Summary: Sometimes is easy to forget that the boy underneath him is just fourteen.
Warning: Underage.
Word Count: 504
Rating: R

( Sometimes )

Comments 6

bruisesonguitar March 31 2006, 10:40:27 UTC

Wow you really managed to convey all of that in just a little over 500 words? That takes talent. Great job.

I especially liked how you described Harry's reactions. :)

aviss March 31 2006, 11:12:03 UTC

Thank you!

littleroo27 April 1 2006, 20:35:51 UTC

shit! that's one hell of a story to pack into 500 words.

I'm very very impressed (and turned on)

aviss April 3 2006, 11:04:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

laurel_tx April 5 2006, 00:35:28 UTC

Ah, this was lovely, Darlin'! Great job, very hot!

darknesspower September 8 2006, 17:43:33 UTC

It was cute, I mean it IS cute! I like it! Good job!