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all dolled up (with nowhere to go)

Oct 16, 2010 17:56

Title: all dolled up (with nowhere to go)
Pairing: Ryeowook x Yesung
Rating: R
Word Count: 1400+
Notes:Written ages ago on a whim and posted just because I can. Also, because Ryeowook is pretty and I am self-indulgent.
Summary: ( The first time Ryeowook cross-dresses, he realizes what Jongwoon wants. )

p: ryeowook x yesung, g: super junior, c: ryeowook, c: yesung

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thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:16:41 UTC

YOU WROTE YEWOOK I AM SCREAMING SO HARD SCREAMING SCREAMING SCREAMING BRB READING OH MY FUCKING GOD YOU FINALLY WROTE YEWOOK

thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:21:46 UTC

OH SHIT I NEED TO PICK UP THE PIECES OF MY HEART LYING ON THE FLOOR JFC /WAILING

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 03:41:59 UTC

[helps you with the pieces]

thundersquall October 17 2010, 05:35:04 UTC

Omg Kelly. /deep heaving breaths. Omg that last bit. Or at least the entire second half. WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL, GUH. Complete punch to the heart. I mean the beginning was hilarious and I had an inkling that it's all unrequited on Ryeowook's part, what with Jongwoon basically only really looking at him when he's dressed as a girl (and who can blame him right, Ryeowook does make a fucking hot girl, lmao).

But the way you wrote it, omg it's beautiful and subtle but heartbreaking all at once. It’s painful, sofuckingpainful, and shit, he should’ve read the manual for this - there must be one, right? - should’ve asked Kyuhyun, should’ve done something to prepare him for the hole that’s gaping in his heart - omg I actually think I teared up a bit, even if it isn't as hard or as harsh as a lot of angst fics I've read. I'm not even sure why, beyond the fact that I'm a complete sap for YeWook, but... like I said, it's something in the way you write, the way you craft your sentences. It all starts out so subtle and builds up slow, and ( ... )

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 03:55:48 UTC

omg when you said you were writing a coherent comment, i didn't know you meant EPIC *_*.

and eep! no tearing up, please! that wasn't the point D: and just, i don't even know how to respond to this. your bias/all-consuming love for them is a special one and i love it so ;)

ahd hahah i just need to write more in general, since i haven't written fic in a while (this was written last spring hahaha). i dug it up today and thought "Why the hell not?" I'm glad it was worth pulling it from my dusty folders :)

thundersquall October 18 2010, 05:01:44 UTC

Sobs I didn't even realise it was so long until I posted it and then I looked at it and was like "Uh Kelly's gonna die laughing". :3

My bias for them is insane. Like I can normally read most angst fics without problem, but if it's YeWook, I start bawling. /sap

You really need to write more, you're an amazingly good writer and I love the way you write ♥ Also YeWook is a very canon pairing, but it's dipping in popularity recently I think. If you look at miracle, it really doesn't get written all that much, mostly only as a background pairing. And it's very very rare to actually get a GOOD fic for them ;___; So thank you for this :DDDD

trivialaffair October 20 2010, 02:58:14 UTC

Hahaha no, it's totally cool. And aldsfmadf I would write more if I, you know, had time T___T.

But seriously, you're so sweet ::swims thankfully and happily in your compliments::

trivialaffair October 18 2010, 03:40:27 UTC

you know, i just realized. isn't yewook a really popular pairing? i was so surprised you were so excited. i thought it gets written all the time haha.

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