[FIC] Il Diavolo Sorriso (3)

[tristripe]

Title:  Il Diavolo Sorriso
Fandom:  Hetalia
Pairing:  Spain/Romano (Spamano)
Rating:  R/M - Very Mature

Summary:  Lovino is trapped by the pirate monster "Carriedo el Diablo" who's smile is just as dangerous as his anger. Despite the horrors that he experiences, Lovino has his own reason to survive, and he will not give up until he finds what he is

Comments

[tristripe]

:: waves hands:: don't worry, I'm not upset at all. I was agreeing with your comments about the Italian and the typos! Like I said, I've been writing fanfics for a long time, so Have had my share of people who are outright mean ('flames' or 'trolls')'. I did not see your comment as an attack. You admitted that it wasn't your thing, hence why it was difficult for you to get into the plot and relate to the characters. But I you were RIGHT about the Italian and the typos, so there was nothing to upset me.

Have you ever read a fanfic that was of a genre that you particularly do not like, but after reading it that authors skill in writing, plot and a characterization just pulls you in and you LOVE it? You shouldn't have, but the awesomeness of the writer made you change your perspective. THAT is what I want to be able to write.

Unfortunatley, I failed in your case. But, you know what, you took the time to acknowledge that, 'hey, I didn't like this, but it could have potential.'THAT is contructive criticism which is the best way for a writer to grow, in my opinion. I perfer that then the empty silence where I know people are reading but no one bothers to say a thing.

So, don't worry, you didn't upset me. You actually helped!

Thank you.