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triskellion

Feathered Frenzy : Chapter 12

Oct 21, 2010 08:06

Master Post

Chapter 11

( The Vulcan council met in a large cave in the hill on the outskirts of the city. )

writing, fanfiction, star trek

Comments 10

tininess October 22 2010, 10:10:06 UTC

woaw. read the whole thing in one sitting. very very enjoyable read.
<3 fjsafdsakf;a

triskellion October 22 2010, 15:02:51 UTC

Thank you. Though there's two more chapters after this one. I'm rather proud of this story.

margarks October 25 2010, 00:27:32 UTC

Hee, for some reason I liked that Spock had to correct Jim's Vulcan, lol.

Yay for approval and Spock finally saying what he really feels in front of the council.

triskellion October 25 2010, 00:54:03 UTC

Genius that he is, I can see Jim having picked up a smattering of this and that in various languages. that doesn't mean he's that good in any of them or that his pronunciation is perfect. I figure he'll be getting better in Vulcan though.

I've wanted Spock to have a chance to stick it to the Council since I saw his acceptance to the VSA in the movie. Yesh.

shatfat December 22 2010, 22:45:19 UTC

Ha. You said something was off, I figured Kirk now had feathers.

triskellion December 22 2010, 23:17:34 UTC

No, that would have been hilarious though. Damn, I didn't even think of it.

nekoii_desu September 18 2011, 06:23:12 UTC

Go where no ship has gone before~~~~~~ Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
I've given up on studying for now, and resorted to reading this baby until its done :D
Then perhaps I can attempt to put those bloody subjects in fore-mind for the exams tomorrow. xD

THEY ARE BONDED!!!! and we have SAMPLES 8D
Spock and Jim BABIES are gonna be POSSIBLE! for such a legendary pair, they must procreate!!!

triskellion September 19 2011, 01:51:54 UTC

The opportunity to procreate was too much fun to skip over. Someday I will write the sequels and include the kiddies.

And there's more! cypriangadigan September 24 2011, 21:13:24 UTC

Aw, babies. I hope they share four.

I like that romance happened, then acceptance happened and there is still more to read. Too often a story ends when it really only just reached the middle, not that this wouldn't have been a good ending, but bonus!

Really adoring your Spock. More and more as I read. (Both of your Spocks)

Re: And there's more! triskellion January 27 2012, 20:21:27 UTC

Oh, comments I never got notices for.

This story wasn't about the romance. It just kind of turned into a romance. I wanted it to be about the arc of events with a romance. I'm glad you like how it turned out.

I love my Spocks too. I do hope I can manage those sequels someday. With babies. Well, the third one would have babies. The second is about settling things with Uhura and improving relations with a new alien race.