Feathered Frenzy : Chapter 7

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Chapter 6

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[elizaria]

spelling: Admiral Mobatsu had a chip in his shoulder

ON his shoulder :)

*goes back to reading*

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Oops

[margarks]

Yay! Jim finally caught a clue! lol. I laughed at his reference to his list form Iowa.

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He may be more mature now, but it's clear in the movie that he hasn't always been so. I couldn't resist.

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Made me laugh too. Thought it was a bit absurd, but how could I cut it out?

Bond, definitely bond.

[cypriangadigan]

Clearly, where's the choice?

I knew it, the Vulcan is too proud. Sometimes testosterone just isn't the prizewinning hand, although I suppose rampant stoicism isn't just a masculine problem. I'm glad Uhura wanted another go, I would have been sad if she had been unfeeling. I like Spock's regret about the loss of Nyota, it shows the relationship meant something.

Finally, I love the hints and starts and stutters that marks the beginning of Jim and Spock's relationship changing from friendship into maybe -and at this stage it still has that maybe feeling, that still building up to something feeling- something more. The solicitousness on Jim's part, the feelings Spock has when ever Kirk is around. It feels organic. Like perhaps this wasn't what they intended for life or imagined for themselves, but at the same time its some what thrilling. That was my long winded way of saying this is getting juicier and I appreciate your storytelling.