Home: Judging Pack

[triskellion]

A little something more from season 3. Enjoy.

Title: Judging Pack
Series: Home
Author: triskellionRating: PG-13

Comments

[ferneberga]

Nice one! I missed this series terribly. Hopefully the muse has returned to you and you'll be updating more often please

[triskellion]

It's the casefic that's holding me back. I'm waffling on the feasibility, but making some progress. Hopefully the results will be interesting enough to make up for some of the delay.

Of course, I'm also utterly frustrated with season six, but that's another matter.

[pclarity]

Re: Season 6 Frustration - Join the club.

Loved the bits with Tony threating the director.

[triskellion]

I can't do a thing with the Tony/Ziva tension, my Tim would never act like that, and my Tony is totally getting some. So I think I'll be junking most of season six. I'm not sure what that means for this yet, but we'll see.

*Grin* Glad you liked. I loved that too. Been wanting to do it for ages.

[djaddict]

Very nice addition to the series. I like the way Ziva approached Tony.

Well done!

[triskellion]

*grin* Thank you. I can see Ziva being confident enough to make the approach but cautious enough to do it right. He is a huge bloody wolf after all.

[triskellion]

Yeah, Jen has possibilities and interest, but here she's just a pain. It's all in how you look at things.

Glad you're willing to check it out despite the anti-Jen sentiment. Hope you continue to enjoy.

[thaddeusfavour]

You're my hero today! I really needed a happy, non-angsty fic to cheer me up. Things have been kind of down lately for me, but this helped cheer me up immensely! Thank you! (Not often you get to make someone's day, but you sure made mine.)

Lovely addition to this universe, as always. I still haven't read everything you've written about the pack, but reading out of order doesn't seem to matter.

You've still got a deft hand with the voices and characters, but I think what mad this one for me was the quiet domestic parts - seeing the guys making room for each other and being together. I really love that in fic, and you do it so well.

The shifter wasn't sure if his alpha noticed the way his old shirts disappeared in rotation, but Gibbs might have noticed them show up under Tony's pillow at his apartment. Tony would keep them there for lonely nights until the scent faded too much, then return it and steal another.This is my favorite detail in the fic. I love this. It makes sense for a shifter, and it's a little sweet, but understated

[triskellion]

Well then, I'm glad the timing worked out so well. This piece has been slowly coming together for weeks just to come out for you today

[ferneberga]

I loved that thing about the shirts, that is so canine or should I say lupine here. I know my dog and my previous dog who was more wolf than German Shepherd loved the smell of used clothes more than anything else, it seems to provide them with comfort

[triskellion]

I can't help but think of how strong sense of smell can effect the mind when dealing with Tony. He just wants a touch of his mate around even when he's sleeping alone.

[kateri_e]

OH this was a fantastic addition to the series. First off the tshirt thing was just too funny and sweet. Great job with Jen and how Tony finally accepts Ziva as pack. Also nice set up for Hiatus and all.

[triskellion]

Thank you. This one came together in so many fits and starts, but I think it really turned out in the end. I'm glad you enjoyed all the bits.