On Knots and Unravelling - Chapter Seven

Apr 20, 2011 10:59


For author's notes and thank yous, see chapter one

(Halfway! Thanks to everyone who is following the story.)

Chapter Seven )

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Another Terrific Chapter! expatbeth April 20 2011, 13:58:06 UTC

Katie being a hilarious drunk, Cook being cheekily chivalrous, Effy being all-knowing, Gina greeting her daughter with "What the fuck, darling?", Naomi and Emily flirting! -- so many things to love!!!

And Naomi: yeah, she's still doing things like leaving Emily to sober up Katie before Rob and Jenna get home. And yeah, maybe she still "isn't brave enough. Yet." But she's making real progress! Items 1, 2, 3 and 5 on her list are covered, so it's just that pesky No. 4 she has to deal with now.

Once again, I find myself eagerly awaiting more. :-)

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Re: Another Terrific Chapter! triptohere April 21 2011, 17:20:52 UTC
Cool, I'm glad you liked it! Number 4 is indeed going to be the most difficult on the list. Thanks for reading :)

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Re: Compulsively Hitting My "Refresh" Button.... expatbeth April 21 2011, 17:44:25 UTC

and wondering why it doesn't make new chapters appear any faster. I'm guessing this situation must be subject to a rule analogous to "a watched pot never boils". ;-)

I'm feeling reasonably confident that your Naomi and Emily ultimately will persuade Katie to accept them as a couple, but I'm dying to see how you get there, and what sort of twists and turns you have in store along the way.

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Re: Compulsively Hitting My "Refresh" Button.... triptohere April 21 2011, 18:23:46 UTC
Your wish = my command.

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Re: Compulsively Hitting My "Refresh" Button.... expatbeth April 21 2011, 18:40:53 UTC

Wow, thanks!!!

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