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HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Sep 17, 2008 22:41

It's that time again, folks! We all like to know what we can do better so it's time for....

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? (THIRD LOL) redheadcarrier September 18 2008, 04:00:21 UTC

Alright!

Asuka Langley Soryu - redheadcarrier

Mai - knifeurrib

Fireflight - innocentfire

Re: HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? godisagirl September 18 2008, 04:04:55 UTC

I'm not claiming to stalk all your threads but from what I've seen Asuka seems to like the pridefulness and bitchiness that so defines her in the series. Now, I understand that sort of attitude can seem detrimental to a multifandom RP and making friends and all that, but I think it does need to show up, even if it is toned down.

This is just from what I've seen though!

Re: HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? redheadcarrier September 18 2008, 04:14:31 UTC

Danke! I'll see what I can do to improve.

Re: HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? (THIRD LOL) peoplesprincess September 18 2008, 04:07:35 UTC

Ohhhh, so *you're* the new Mai? Sweet.

I don't know her canon, but I like Asuka's confident cockiness. XD Mai is excellent and makes me crackship Maizula just the tiniest, tiniest bit whut >.>- from what I've seen, you've got the fine line between her apathy and her... non-apathy down pat. I hope our Zuko shows up again. D:

Re: HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? (THIRD LOL) redheadcarrier September 18 2008, 04:14:45 UTC

Thanks muchly. :)

Re: HOW'S MAH DRIVIN' GUYS? (THIRD LOL) shinji_eva September 18 2008, 14:01:15 UTC

I think you're doing a good job with Asuka, specially when it comes to Shinji and Asuka's relationship. They're slowly getting closer which is good. It's not too fast or anything like that. (Though I have a feeling that their closeness will be parted again once the End of Evangelion plot rolls around which questions-she gonna remember everything correct? As in, going to find out that Shinji has been lying to her this whole time?)

As for improvement wise? I say just keep doing what your doing and with the relationship with Shinji-just keep giving him love/hate. (:

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