The Flower and The River
Title: The Flower and The River
Chapter: 25
Pairing: Xiuris (Xiumin/Kris)
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: The flower naturally grows near the river that flows with love and patience. It is happy and content near the wide expanse of water that drifts downstream. The river needs the flower, it finds it too beautiful to let go. It give whatever it has to ( Read more... )
Chapter: 25
Pairing: Xiuris (Xiumin/Kris)
Rating: PG - 13
Summary: The flower naturally grows near the river that flows with love and patience. It is happy and content near the wide expanse of water that drifts downstream. The river needs the flower, it finds it too beautiful to let go. It give whatever it has to ( Read more... )
Now surprisingly enough, I have to confess, I'm not this romantic in real life. I'm so not. I call people out on their bullshit 24/7 and honestly sometimes I can't understand people with their love and crap. Half of the time when I'm writing my chapters I keep thinking "god this is so cheesy I would laugh if I read this".
I actually had a very long time where I didn't or couldn't update this story, where I was totally questioning Minseok's character. It was the point in the story after he realized that Wu Fan is going to let Tao stay and he goes all crazy temper and says he's leaving, and then the next chapter he sleeps with Wu Fan again and can I just say I DID NOT PLAN THAT. it happened and I thought about seriously deleting it but i just kept writing and I was so literally and completely annoyed with Minsoek like why the hell would you go back to him you idiot what is wrong with you? but he did. and he's weird.
Now I'm going to assume you're talking about the violent part as in Wu Fan not willing to give Tao over right? Yeah honestly I didn't understand that either. and the only lame excuse that I can come up for him is he is stupid. yeah. that's all I got. because personally I know that my mother would die for me, kill for me, throw anybody under the bus so that I could live. I know it with all my freaking heart and yet stupid ass Wu Fan is all "no you can't have tao" and I'm like 'this better be good for the plot you fool cuz you're son is in danger and I want to kill you myself'
So all that said,
TT-TT yes my spelling errors i know it happens in all of my stories. One of my shinee fics got put on a rec list, and the comment for it was: yes a lot of grammar mistakes but great character developement. and I thought 'ah yes let me go kills myself now'
And after all of this THANK YOU SO MUCH. I really enjoyed reading your comment. seriously I mean that with all my heart. it was so refreshing and amazing and like I said, honesty is number one in my book. I really like it when readers (and there are so few) can take a step back and say 'we all know this wouldnt happen in real life right cuz wtf.' yes. yes indeed.
Thank you x1000! I really hope to continue to hear from you in future chapters! Thank you so much for reading and commenting and analyzing and OMG I JUST REALIZED YOUR PARENTS BASICALLY COMMENTED ON MY STORY OW MY HEART.
Thank you!
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Buuuuut, yeeeeah he is KIND OF DUMB. -____- I'm thinking maternal instincts have always been stronger right? Must have something to do with a huge parasite sitting in your stomach for 9 months so....wait, but Minseok didn't get pregnant. Whatever, my head hurts now. ;p
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