Fic for jarsy: Dissonance

[trinityofone]

This was just supposed to be a tiny ficlety thing, but it kinda got away from me. Um, yay?

For jarsy, who endured. ;-)

Title: Dissonance
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Length: ~3050 words
Summary: dis•so•nance n.
1. A harsh, disagreeable combination of sounds; discord.
2. Lack of agreement, consistency, or harmony; conflict.
3. Music. A

Comments

[smittywing]

“Curse you and your hidden depths!”

You always manage to get right to the core of the Sheppard/McKay relationship and for that I fangirl you like whoa. (Also, I friended you, which is a tragically late confession, but you know what they say about permission and forgiveness.)

First off, I SO needed this today. I didn't know how much I needed this until my work minion came and knocked on my door to find out why I was laughing so loudly she could hear it across the hall. Oops.

Secondly, OMG. RONON. The fourth movement. John watched Firefly and knows about the Special Hell. (Of course he does.) Rodney piss-poor sense of timing. (And I was totally waiting for him to say, "I love you," when the music stopped and I love this even more than that.) And John and his Random Lip Reading Skillz. Which should totally not be a surprise to anyone at this point because John produces skills like some people produce pop trivia about 80s music

[trinityofone]

Also, I friended you, which is a tragically late confession

Ha ha! So she says to the person who is responding to her comment A MONTH LATER.

Anyway, hi! It has been a good month of being friends with you. *g*

This is some great feedback, too, which I really wish I had thanked you for earlier. I'm always happy to hear that I've embarrassed people in front of their co-workers, and I'm glad you liked the Ronon bit. He's hard, man. Basically I just steal my characterization of him from sdraevn. She is the Ronon master.

produces skills like some people produce pop trivia about 80s music.

One of us should get John into a shirt that says that, 'cause it's awesome.

You are the bestest

Oh, I am really not. But thank you. ;-)

[trinityofone]

I was telling you THE SECRETS OF THE UNIVERSE. But since it's been a month, I've forgotten them. Ooops.

I still think you're incredibly awesome for having taken me to the BBR. I should have thanked you earlier, 'cause dude, not only did it inspire fic, it was awesome wacky fun. And my ears have mostly recovered by now.

Also, the boysexin' is pretty much what I'm thinking about all the time. Sometimes it's fun being me. ;-)

[micehell]

Your sense of humor is one of the best things about you, and with your talent for writing, that's saying something. Vogon poetry, hidden depths, and all were so farking hilarious that I had to bite my lip to keep my coworkers from looking at me funny. However, Rodney could no longer classify him as a musician without doing grave insult to elementary school recorder players and Yanni fans everywhere did me in. I think I ruptured something.

Mucho thankses for this, it was well worth the pain. :)

[sylph_ironlight]

Instead he poked Rodney with one emphatic finger and whispered, “Special hell.”

That had me snorting, and this:

“Oh my God,” he said. “It’s Vogon poetry set to music!...“I SAID, IT’S LIKE VOGON POETRY SET TO MUSIC!” Sheppard gave him a blank look. “LIKE DENTAL SURGERY FOR YOUR EARS!” Sheppard shrugged. “LIKE A READY-MADE MIGRAINE!”

had me giggling. Absolutely loved it!

[lay_of_luthien]

Those were my two favorite bits (other than the porn)

Atlantis/Firefly/Hitchhiker's Guide. There's nothing better.

[fluffyllama]

*wishes to audition for the part of the llama-thing*

That's utterly fabulous. So perfectly funny I almost died when Rodney started getting carried away. And such a lovely switch to the smut. *happy sigh*