Comments | trinityofone: Fic: Athosian For Beginners (Rodney/Teyla, 1/2)

trinityofone

Fic: Athosian For Beginners (Rodney/Teyla, 1/2)

Apr 23, 2007 13:13

Hi! I'm not dead! Also: fic!

Title: Athosian For Beginners
Pairing: Rodney/Teyla
Rating: PG (alas!)
Length: ~11,000 words
Summary: She knew what was happening, but it was impossible. Like suddenly knowing, The sun won't rise in the morning. Gravity doesn't work. The Wraith don't mean any harm...
A/N: Written for empressvesica's sticksandsnark prompt(s), which included Teyla ( Read more... )

fic, sga

Comments 2

empressvesica April 24 2007, 03:52:29 UTC

I’m not even waiting until part III to start the squeeing. I could not possibly adore this more - not even if it WERE porn.There would have been a time I wouldn’t have believed I would say this quite so adamantly, but everything doesn’t have to be porn - really it doesn’t.

Side note: I don’t know if you remember, but you should have known you were in like Flynn with this idea. I adored the tiny, fic socks off “Lingua Franca” and grinned like a loon when I saw you’d written for me and then WHAT you’d written - well, grinned for two seconds and then went back to hunching back over my own fic in progress and cursing at the clock.

But enough about how awesome you are for spending time thinking about how this even works in canon and back to how awesome this fic is.

OMG - Teyla’s paraphrase of everything Rodney has ever, will ever, and could possibly ever want to say was perfect and probably the funniest and most perfectly Rodney paragraph I’ve read in ages.

Teyla realized that she knew this script so well she almost didn't need a ( ... )

timeblind November 12 2007, 04:52:32 UTC

Wow. WOW! The premise of the story was brilliant, but the delivery of it was GOLD. While reading this I was like "oh, i want to comment on this! And this! And this!"... and of course the thing that's sticking out in my mind right now is the Kirk thing. That made me laugh so hard because it's SUCH a Rodney thing to do.

You were able to convey the feelings, setting and atmosphere of Teyla's isolation... even Ronon's isolation, through Teyla's thoughts.

This is SO wonderful... moving on to part three now, and I'll squee more at you later. Also memming this. :D