Past, Present & Future, Chapter 4

[trieze0713]

Title: Past, Present & Future
Author: trieze0713
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu
Length: Chaptered
Genres: AU, Drama, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG

(Prologue) (Chapter 1) (Chapter 2) (Chapter 3)

Chapter 4: The Beginning & The Lightning

Yunho silently watched his son wandering around the kitchen preparing breakfast without a single word. It’s

Comments

[dilovesyunjae]

SPOT!

[trieze0713]

NINJA!

[dilovesyunjae]

OMO!!!! Yunnie has a heart disease! And oh god, the father son moment in the kitchen made me so sad!!!! What will binnie's reaction be when they tell him about yunnie's sickness?? Aishh...

[trieze0713]

ah, sometimes a kid will grow up when he needs to ;) Thank you!

[criztalinz]

SPOT 2!!!

[criztalinz]

Yunho loves baby!Binnie so much that Jae got jealous.. I can sorta understand that - the need/desire to be the ONLY one in your beloved's heart. But since Yunho is my sweetie I'm still mad at Jae ^^.

I love Yun..I really really DO.. But God~ I love it when he suffers in a fic XXDD (psycho much??). He's so pretty when he cries :D (more suffering!Yun please ^^)

“Your beloved son is coming home. That would be my parting gift for you. Thank you for bringing me here and let me met him.”
*sniff*.. I dont know why I feel sad by this >.<..
So Changmin really loves Yunho, huh? I'm so glad that SOMEONE still cares for him *glares at Jae the Brat*

More bb!!

[trieze0713]

Gahhh! It's killing me to make Yunho suffers T___T But hey, I gotta write what I gotta write *grin*

Oh yeah, changmin doesn't have anyone else but Yunho since his mother died... poor Min...

Trying to give you more here *wink* thanks bb!

[hi_yu]

oh Im happy that you updated this. Eventhough as the story goes, the angsty cloud is coming closer and closer. ANd I cant stand angst T_T. so until the angst come right in, I'll continue reading the story. Hehe, then maybe skip few chapters when the angst is in full blast, and continue again hehe. Sowie.
I can't imagine whats going to happen next. Which one is going to happen first? the meeting between yunjae, or the meeting between jaejoong and moonbin???? and what's going to happen later when moonbin want to stay with jaejae???? NOOOOO T__T..
*sighed*...
well then, keep up the good work!!!! I like your writing :). everything is in details and steadily developing.
Hwaiting!!!

[trieze0713]

Ah, I can't stand angst too, so I guess there will be more twist than angst? *getting confused myself* LOL

I like to write in details cause many times I'm confused with lack of info of how something happened or developed... so yeah... there I go :) Thank you so much for your comment.

[cleichiisai]

Ah Yunho. what did he do to experience such dse... I hope everything will go well... until Yunho and Jae meet...

[trieze0713]

He didn't do anything wrong, he's just bound to have something better in the end ;) Thank you!

[trieze0713]

Thank you for understanding Moonbin! He's practically the only person for him since birth -- Min won't even compare! Ha3x