I don't know if it's an attribute of good acting or bad acting (though I do maintain that Shia is, in fact, a good actor) that one is a bad liar, but I think that is one thing we can definitely take away about Sam. ;)
Haha, you know there's currently several genderswap Tony/Pepper fics with Shia LaBeouf starring as Pepper, right?
Anyway, this is an epic piece of writing, a Tony-voice I squee'd over every few lines, and the best characterization of Megan Fox's appearance I have ever seen. Tony, you perv, you.
Definitely looking forward to the next installments.
Several But why? Why make Pepper not a chick anymore? And why do I feel so turned on right now?
And I had to tone Tony's perving down a bit. I mean hey, she may have only just turned eighteen, but... she did just turn eighteen! And lookathat sweet thang.
Um, sheesh! I'm so giggly right now I'm not sure what to say! But I am loving Tony to bits here, and poor Sam is giving me the urge to smack my own forehead!
In other words: I am completely sucked in, and I love you. More, please!
You've got everyone perfectly. The first-person narration is brilliant, down to the snarky comments he throws in. Well done on blending S7 and SHIELD, also your knowledge on NDAs and classified information. I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait for Part the Third!
Honestly, the connoting SHIELD with S7 and the idea that this wasn't their first coverup was pretty much the inspiration for the whole fic. Well that and Percy's benevolent takeover of corporate America, it was really just too easy!
But I like S7, a lot potentially interesting there, I wish we saw more stuff with it.
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! AMAZINGNESS!!!! YOU ARE SO FULL OF WIN!!!!
I love tony stark and Judy's reaction was awsome, and it's soooo CUTE that Sam is such an awful liar. GO YOU!
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Anyway, this is an epic piece of writing, a Tony-voice I squee'd over every few lines, and the best characterization of Megan Fox's appearance I have ever seen. Tony, you perv, you.
Definitely looking forward to the next installments.
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And I had to tone Tony's perving down a bit. I mean hey, she may have only just turned eighteen, but... she did just turn eighteen! And lookathat sweet thang.
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Um, sheesh! I'm so giggly right now I'm not sure what to say! But I am loving Tony to bits here, and poor Sam is giving me the urge to smack my own forehead!
In other words: I am completely sucked in, and I love you. More, please!
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You've got everyone perfectly. The first-person narration is brilliant, down to the snarky comments he throws in. Well done on blending S7 and SHIELD, also your knowledge on NDAs and classified information. I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait for Part the Third!
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But I like S7, a lot potentially interesting there, I wish we saw more stuff with it.
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