Big Bang Oneshot featuring Jiyong. -- Surrender.

Nov 04, 2009 17:24

Title: Surrender
Pairing: GDxTop, GDxTaeyang
Rating: R
Genre: AU, Romance, Thriller, Angst
Disclaimer: I own nothing, except my twisted mind.
Summary: Jiyong moves in with his boyfriend.
Word count: 1406
Notes: There is some violence. Un-betad. If there are mistakes, let me know. Looking for someone to beta also.

Love can be dangerous. )

oneshot, thriller, big bang fanfic, alternate universe, angst

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life_not_knife November 5 2009, 00:14:30 UTC
wow, amazing! I would write more but i have to be up again in 5hrs. Either way, great plot,writing,grammar... Everything. X x x X cnt wait to read more from you :D. X
P.s...ahh! You killed my baby! Oh wel i didnt want gd and ty to die so..yh. X

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life_not_knife November 5 2009, 00:15:45 UTC
yey! FC! I never get FC. Hehe.

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trickylady November 5 2009, 00:17:59 UTC
LOL.

I guess other people are afraid of my twisted mind?

thanks so much for reading and commenting.
-bows-
I had this idea in my head for a long time and I finally decided to write it. =)

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heatherxwho November 5 2009, 00:49:25 UTC
crazy obsessive boyfriend status.
i never like those storylines, but it's ok.
it's the way it's written that i appreciate.
great job. :]

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trickylady November 5 2009, 00:57:28 UTC
lol, this was based on my haru haru parody. heh.

but I'm glad you liked the writing style at least.

-bows-

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trickylady November 5 2009, 02:18:03 UTC
lol, that is weird.
Wouldn't someone like smut with their OTPs? lol.

thanks for reading.

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trickylady November 5 2009, 02:24:50 UTC
lol, I see what you mean then.

if you give me a prompt; I can try to write it. =)
and if you want it AU/angst/crack - you'll have to tell me in advance too. ^_^v

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xomg_dragonluvx November 5 2009, 02:38:46 UTC
*shivers*
Ah, TOP..you pabo. *shakes head*

That was so sad, but yet so beautiful. I <3 your writing!

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trickylady November 5 2009, 02:44:26 UTC
-pets- don't worry, it's just a story. =)

aww, thank you!
I'm always worried about the flow and such.
thanks for commenting!

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super_frannie November 5 2009, 04:59:44 UTC
WHAT?! Yeah that was how I reacted. ahahah (:
This is awesome. (:
So do you still need a beta? haha

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trickylady November 5 2009, 05:04:31 UTC
lol. I guess that's a good reaction.
and thank you!
I do~ actually, lol.
I'm sure some phrases could run smoother, if you're interested in helping? lol.

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super_frannie November 5 2009, 05:05:33 UTC
ahaha sure!(: It's g-top!(:

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trickylady November 5 2009, 05:08:04 UTC
woot!
that would be awesome. ^-^v

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