A Little Extra Time: [Chad/Karin]

Sep 24, 2006 03:51

Title: A Little Extra Time
Author: heron_advocate / trevorskeeper
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Chad/Karin
Character(s): Sado "Chad" Yasutora, Kurosaki Karin
Summary: That Chad. He was a weird one.
Prompt(s): 060, 'walk,' for 100_situations
Word Count: 692
A/N: The world needs more Chad/Karin! D: By the by, Karin's teenagerish, probably around 16, making Chad 21. I think. And just FYI, ( Read more... )

fandom: bleach, character: kurosaki karin, character: sado "chad" yasutora, pairing: chad/karin, prompt/challenge: 100_situations

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sublimeclarity September 24 2006, 13:13:27 UTC
*dies*

I love your characterization. Chad is ridiculously nice and patient, while Karin is stubborn and a total tomboy, just as we are used to seeing them. This piece just goes to show how compatible they are.

Also, your dialogue might as well have jumped straight out of the manga. The "I think that everyone's as tall as they're supposed to be" line is so Chad it's not even funny. XD

You should write more of this pairing as well as that Neville -> Ginny -> Tom bunny you mentioned!

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heron_advocate September 24 2006, 19:05:34 UTC
He, thanks! Chad/Karin is so easy to write. They just mesh so well, you know?

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heron_advocate September 25 2006, 19:20:04 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad! :D

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hellboy September 26 2006, 01:23:27 UTC
This is adorable, in characterization and everything. I agree with sublimeclarity - This could have very jumped right out of the manga, it's so good.

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heron_advocate September 26 2006, 01:34:07 UTC
Thank you!

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dried_frog_pill September 26 2006, 18:30:45 UTC
*jumping on the characterization bandwagon* They're so perfectly described, and I love Chad's last line and how Karin gets taken aback by it. XDDD ♥

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heron_advocate September 26 2006, 20:07:27 UTC
Thanks!

She was just SO SHOCKED that Chad would interrupt. Because apparently he doesn't interrupt her a lot. LOL. >.>

And ahaha, that icon cracks me up every time you use it. ♥

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kane_shi_megami June 24 2007, 06:37:07 UTC
Why is this something that could totally happen??? you wrote it so well too XD

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heron_advocate June 24 2007, 06:41:13 UTC
Heee~

Thank you. :)

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