I don't like the way you use the word 'almost'. [Especially not when he's having trouble catching his breath, because it really fucking hurts when Ade presses down on the wound like that.]
Yeah, they kinda skimped on the field medic training in pilot school [Deliberately light, but frankly he's genuinely worried. That's...really quite a lot of blood] Give me a second-
Just... Keep pressure on it so I don't bleed out. [He squirms a little trying to wriggle out of his torn shirt so they can use it to dress the wound.] Least they have bad aim, huh? Fifteen inches further up, and I'd be singing soprano for the rest of my life.
[She resists rolling her eyes. Like this is anything new for him.] Of course, sir. But that hypo should be kicking in at any moment now, and then you won't feel a thing.
The wound is superficial, Captain, but in an area densely packed with nerve endings. If you would cease movement, it would not hurt as much. [Spock's terseness is the only indication that he is, seemingly, losing patience with his superior officer.]
Meaning it hurts like hell, Spock! [And pain does not a happy Captain make. At all. He's trying to keep still, he really is, but it's difficult when you're in pain.] Just... Can we at least make me stop bleeding so much?
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*She could hear their pursuers gaining on them* Let's go.
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How good is you aim?
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