I Can See You Smiling (for you Ashley)

[treeof611]

these songs are all the same
all promising love and life
what i feel they've all explained
what i know they've all defined

all they sing has been repeated
all with the same words and lines
how i've loved they cant deny
and what ive lived they cant define

oh im in love with you
oh im in love with you
oh im in love with you

and i can see you smiling.
I Can See You Smiling (MP3)

i wrote it, came up with the tune, and the chords...just for you...

i need to add drums (possibly handdrums) and i need to resing because it sounds like im a country hick (no offence to any of you out there who are)

and jae? i think i want you to sing w/ me. i need a second male vocal with a more silky voice to complement my husky voice.

and then here's kat's song.

http://www.treeof611.com/iloveyoutoo.mp3
that's not the real song title, and we're not done. she needs to resing and possibly rerecord the piano.
if you cant tell, it's a music box unwinding in the beginning and end. i think its the cutest thing in the world. lol