FNL Fic - SIGNS, Conclusion

[treehero]

Title:     Signs
Author: treeHero
Rating: PG
Featuring:  The Riggins clan, Jason Street
Disclaimer: All characters who appear in this story are the sole property of NBC Universal Television Studios, Film 44, Imagine Entertainment, and their creators. This fic is for entertainment purposes only and in appreciation of a truly shiny show.
Summary: Who

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[shelbecat]

ooohhh!!! AW!!! YAY!!!!!

Fabulous!!!

On the east side of the lake, a brilliant full moon had risen. One second not there; one second there. Just as fast as a Pop Tart shooting out of the toaster.

I loved the image, and the throwback to the Pop Tart was hilarious :)

He watched the moon fiercely, gripping the edge of the dock. "Mom used to say that the full moon in August was a sign that you should protect what you already have."

Jason thought for a moment. "You think that's a good idea right now?"

"I don't know." Tim swung his feet up onto the dock, taking a long look at the dark shapes of Walt and Billy on the shore.

Perfect. No matter how much his father screws up, Tim is still his son (and a child) and can't give his dad up for anything. So painful.

The peepers kept on peeping. The night breeze blew. The August moon shone down on the two boys on the dock, one patiently shaping for the other the letters his Mom had taught him not so long ago … T-e-x-a-s 4-e-v-e-r.

Did everyone quote this part? I'm not even going to check, I love it too much to leave it out.

Perfect. Perfect. Perfect.

[treehero]

I'm so glad you liked it, especially the uber-Riggins-video creator! There are some really good writers for FNL -- appropriately so -- and am glad when I get a thumbs up from the gang. The passages you mention all ones that "popped" into my head (thanks muse) and make it even more rewarding when they're what readers like. BTW, "Wedding" is great, just so you know. I'm reading chapters and just need to comment at some point. Am also re-reading "Reunion" and getting reacquainted with the technique of having a sentence of action *before* dialogue. Doesn't always have to go after. Gonna work on that.